Could be a companion song to "I Will Survive." You've got a great voice, but put a disco queen diva on this track and it will really come alive.

I really dislike this genre, so I don't feel qualified to vote on this song. I wanted to add a note because I've been checking out a number of your pieces and have been impressed. Your songwriting is really solid even as you move between fairly disparate styles of music. I'm looking forward to your next entry.

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on a really tight piece. Like the fretless bass and the
general arrangement. The wordage is there and well
writen but...aaahem...your not putting out the power pack
w/ the vocals. Try more air intake and letting it come
from the diaphram pushing up the air form the lungs and
sing from there. You allow to much nazil to over run
your potential. I can hear your not tone deff as you sing
in key but your not projecting to your potential. Listen to
some opera and try doing scales up and down, (ten
minutes a day), in that venue to practice with for better
control. Bypass the nazil tones they sould be used only
when your in a range where your really straining to keep
up with the pitch. You have power but you haven't
harnest the clearity and pure tone to make yourself a
really dynamic vocalist. I hope you'll read this with the
adult understanding that that i'm trying to be honest with
my delivery to the awarness in this field. Not intended as
a slight or belittlement. You have and will have more
really good works coming. I hope this dribble may help
and exersize that vocal box of yours, it's a good one.


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This has got to be the best piece of constructive criticism I've recieved on this site so far. I've gotten some good feedback, but nothing like this before, and I thank you for it. I am definitely taking your advice and trying some vocal exercises everyday. Now if everyone would comment like this, we would have a much better community and some great songs!

Again thanks!

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