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| AndrewB said 1428 days ago (December 26th, 2005) | |
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Not too bad good idea dude! I think i will add some more stuff. Ill try to get some vocals in there but i cant sing lol Check out my latest song called Two Sides (Demo 2)
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| jeremus said 1428 days ago (December 26th, 2005) | |
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nice for a.... would fit nicely into a commercial. Check out my latest song called Break of Dawn
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| jeremus said 1428 days ago (December 26th, 2005) | |
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PADZ try a piano or some melody to carry the song...a nice pad would make the difference...all of it. Check out my latest song called Break of Dawn
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| dreadmon said 1427 days ago (December 27th, 2005) | |
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Cool groove What this song seems to need is a little something in the middle, some textures or pads, not even necessarily chords, but something to float between the low end of bass and the high end of cymbals and some of the "scratches". Good assembly. Check out my latest song called Dive!
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| screamalexz said 1426 days ago (December 28th, 2005) | |
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layers oh glad your second song is done. the beat is strong. it could use more layers. layering is a good thing. maybe have sounds coming in and out like cipher stated. sort of like a rustling sound coming at you from different angles if that makes sense. for your second song this is amazing. maybe even get some one to come in with some guitar on it with some lead that pans and fades in and out or something. i like the riff near the end it works nicely. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| AndrewB said 1426 days ago (December 28th, 2005) | |
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layers ok i might have to try this Check out my latest song called Two Sides (Demo 2)
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| Leon said 1422 days ago (January 1st, 2006) | |
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This is just the first and a half side... I like this one too...You're on a roll, man.... (Hey, minnesota guy here too.) There are areas that are lush with sounds but other parts are a little bare and need to be filled. I know this is just a demo, but I can imagine how great this will sound when this is completed. I will be watching the song's progress, and looking forward to more songs from you. Check out my latest song called The Nightingale (music and lyrics by Oceans)
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| AndrewB said 1422 days ago (January 1st, 2006) | |
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This is just the first and a half side... Thanks a lot man :D U are my MN Brother! Check out my latest song called Two Sides (Demo 2)
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| AndrewB said 1422 days ago (January 1st, 2006) | |
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Song Almost Complete By the Way, This song is almost done. Havent had a lot of time to do anything. Bare with me :D Check out my latest song called Two Sides (Demo 2)
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CIPHER
That's a nice tight beat you've got going on. I really like the second "squelchy" riff that comes in about half way through the tune.
As in instrumental piece - and this is my own perosnal preference - I would like to hear more layers and textures. Things coming in and out, more panning, sounds that are barely there etc.
I'm a more is more kind of guy. Maybe add in some deep sonic throbbing under the whole thing plus some more effects and swirls. I think a few vocal samples could kick this song into high gear. Maybe even add a midsection breakdown where the music kind of dissolves before reforming under a build-up beat.
Cool vibe tho.