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A song that I wrote to cope with some heavy break ups. Thanks for listening...
Lyrics:
fourteen hundred hours,
we don't have to be,
I can feel you always,
taking every part of me.
and sunsets speak softly,
right before they bleed,
and I can feel you always,
taking every part of me...
and what will you wait for?
a glimce of hope,
from a flaccid dream?
this inadvertent torture,
when people say,
what they don't mean.
and I swear I heard you scream...
"this is the last time,
this is the last time that I try.
this is the last time,
this is the last time that I'll cry,
this is the last time, here tonight..."
because anymore we say now,
"nothing is to be."
holding on forever,
diverting everything...
and sunsets speak softly,
right before they bleed,
and I can feel you ever,
taking every part of me...
and what will you wait for?
a glimce of hope,
from a flaccid dream?
this inadvertent torture,
when people say,
what they don't mean.
and I swear I heard you scream...
"this is the last time,
this is the last time that I try.
this is the last time,
this is the last time to decide,
this is the last time, here tonight..."
so make it right...
right away...
Hardware:
MOTU 828, Behringer B-2
Software:
GB2
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Like Your Playing &mdash 12/29/05 - 06:32:13 AM
Production is clear to my ears. Good melody. Your singing is strong and
emotive.
I was thinking that it might sound more interesting and provide more
contrast to change the vocal production on the "this is the last time" part
- maybe bring them up a little or maybe add some instrument ... electric
guitar amybe? I think that the piano loop you chose works well as a coda
here. [ Reply to This ]
Like Your Playing &mdash 12/29/05 - 06:34:34 AM
BTW, relationships are difficult enough, but let me say from experience that
being in the navy doesn't help make staying together easier. --- Mungo [ Reply to This ]
pretty good &mdash 12/29/05 - 12:30:47 PM
ya this song is pretty badass great guitar and the singing is ok n ot that great but ya overall its a pretty good song thatll ill prolly download [ Reply to This ]
good stuff &mdash 01/05/06 - 05:58:16 AM
i can here the sincerity in your voice........piano sample is fantastic....you should sing a little motif over it...............maybe make the guitar less harsh sounding to suit the mood......thats my opinion but. [ Reply to This ]
hey...sweet &mdash 01/25/06 - 10:54:36 PM
i'm pretty stoked to hear a vocalist that's unafraid to let it rip over an
acoustic piece like this.
very strong piece... just KEEP doing it.... you will go places. [ Reply to This ]
emotional &mdash 05/09/06 - 11:41:00 AM
the guitar is a little harsh and overpowering in the song. i like the vocal style. the rhythem guitar volume is fine, but the vocals are a bit overwelmed by the melody. a good track just needs some volume issues worked out. nice emotion especially near the end. [ Reply to This ]
dude i love this song &mdash 05/20/06 - 11:49:08 PM
the lyrics are really cool and i really like your singing. id have to
disagree with mungo cuz i didnt really like the piano i thought it was
good with just the guitar and the piano really didnt fit... but i still love
this song good work and make more! [ Reply to This ]
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emotive.
I was thinking that it might sound more interesting and provide more
contrast to change the vocal production on the "this is the last time" part
- maybe bring them up a little or maybe add some instrument ... electric
guitar amybe? I think that the piano loop you chose works well as a coda
here.
[ Reply to This ]