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Sheer inspiration transformed into a passionately written instrumental with meaningful lyrics.
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I walk in a way that I'm stuck and frustrated (By I ain't gonna stop 'a movin')
And how long has it been since my stuff was updated? (Time for me to drop some new sh-t)
Help me to breathe, you see seldom I dream
I'm held deep in a cell, a cell pelted with grief
What they tell me to be has not helped in the least
If a record would sell I'd then tell my beliefs
I'd help you believe and not welcome the beast
I'd speak of the peace that I've felt in the breeze
I'd spill you relief, equally help you be free
I fell to my knees, helped me develop an ease
Peltin' and meltin' the siege, meltin' the dwellin' and need
Killin' the evil and seeds, beatin' the hell of disease
And these thoughts that are creepin', see my self as a demon
Who thinks people are frail and they can tell that I'm bleedin'
I'mma help you to read the brail drilled in the trees
So your body and soul will all melt into me
Indellable speach reepin' the wealth of the meanin'
Of me tellin' the people we can't help it but be
I walk in a way that I'm stuck and frustrated (By I ain't gonna stop 'a movin')
And how long has it been since my stuff was updated? (Time for me to drop some new sh-t)
Everything remembered is holdin' me, I can't stop it (And there's no escapin' it)
I'm findin' my mind is just what I'd hoped it'd be (Is divine light breakin' in?)
Society has it's own way that it works
Recieve patience at birth and you'll be placed with the first
But me I've watied and waited, I may stay on the search
Can't stop, I'm constantly movin' I wont stay in reverse
If I break than it hurts, this I've accepted as true
The next step that I'll use is spread the lesson to youth
It's what I do with the music, your best bet to get through's
Get up and move it or lose it and this'll get you there soon
Past the peril and doom, screw what America views
Sure it's fair how they fight, until they tear 'em in two!
And now they're in the news with failed marriages,
fueds, boozin' and heroine, shrooms until they scared of the truth
Now we're fearin' the mirror that we're starin' into
Just like the parents and prudes thinkin' that they're in a movie
Am I really a villain who interferin' witchu? (No!)
Grab a chair in the room, duck and prepare for the boom!
Everything remembered is holdin' me, I can't stop it (And there's no escapin' it)
I'm findin' my mind is just what I'd hoped it'd be (Is divine light breakin' in?)
Statements of grace to erase pages of hate
While the late days of the pain take all the hatred way
While the blame lays in the pavement we pave ways to be safe
As I say (Let me out of here)
Drained of the taste of the lame way that we wait
Makin' a blatant mistake, achin' and wastin' away
Wasted and wakin' in day facin' a nation of rage
I'll say (Let me out of here, let me out of here)
And how long has it been since my stuff was updated? (Time for me to drop some new sh-t)
Help me to breathe, you see seldom I dream
I'm held deep in a cell, a cell pelted with grief
What they tell me to be has not helped in the least
If a record would sell I'd then tell my beliefs
I'd help you believe and not welcome the beast
I'd speak of the peace that I've felt in the breeze
I'd spill you relief, equally help you be free
I fell to my knees, helped me develop an ease
Peltin' and meltin' the siege, meltin' the dwellin' and need
Killin' the evil and seeds, beatin' the hell of disease
And these thoughts that are creepin', see my self as a demon
Who thinks people are frail and they can tell that I'm bleedin'
I'mma help you to read the brail drilled in the trees
So your body and soul will all melt into me
Indellable speach reepin' the wealth of the meanin'
Of me tellin' the people we can't help it but be
I walk in a way that I'm stuck and frustrated (By I ain't gonna stop 'a movin')
And how long has it been since my stuff was updated? (Time for me to drop some new sh-t)
Everything remembered is holdin' me, I can't stop it (And there's no escapin' it)
I'm findin' my mind is just what I'd hoped it'd be (Is divine light breakin' in?)
Society has it's own way that it works
Recieve patience at birth and you'll be placed with the first
But me I've watied and waited, I may stay on the search
Can't stop, I'm constantly movin' I wont stay in reverse
If I break than it hurts, this I've accepted as true
The next step that I'll use is spread the lesson to youth
It's what I do with the music, your best bet to get through's
Get up and move it or lose it and this'll get you there soon
Past the peril and doom, screw what America views
Sure it's fair how they fight, until they tear 'em in two!
And now they're in the news with failed marriages,
fueds, boozin' and heroine, shrooms until they scared of the truth
Now we're fearin' the mirror that we're starin' into
Just like the parents and prudes thinkin' that they're in a movie
Am I really a villain who interferin' witchu? (No!)
Grab a chair in the room, duck and prepare for the boom!
Everything remembered is holdin' me, I can't stop it (And there's no escapin' it)
I'm findin' my mind is just what I'd hoped it'd be (Is divine light breakin' in?)
Statements of grace to erase pages of hate
While the late days of the pain take all the hatred way
While the blame lays in the pavement we pave ways to be safe
As I say (Let me out of here)
Drained of the taste of the lame way that we wait
Makin' a blatant mistake, achin' and wastin' away
Wasted and wakin' in day facin' a nation of rage
I'll say (Let me out of here, let me out of here)
I think that you have some good idea's here.
Verse 1, you keep a sincapated rhyme pattern. It captures a repatitious
flow of the same thing day in, and day out.
Verse 2, you break up your rhyme pattern which shows you (as a
charictor) breaking off and finding your own voice.
Verse 3, you break into the sycapated rhyme pattern (repatitious every
day life) with a break screaming "Let me out of here.") Cool change.
I think that your "chorus" or "hook" could use a little manipulation. Try
and find a 1 or 2 phrase statement that could really drive the tune
home. Something that grabs the listener by the gut. Your verses give
a good explanation and tell a good story, but the hook is what reels
the listener in.
I like your stuff, keep workin' on your craft.