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Keywords:
piano (602), holistik (40), rap (166), hip-hop (60), love (945), God (188), kurbstomp (48), music (148), deep (35), poetic (8)
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Description:
Another very inspired piano based track.
Lyrics:
Didn't you realize? Well I did
You're pure form of the beauty of life kid
I think that you should know that if you're find then I am too
Use what Life has given your mind and glide through
Helpin' you to bloom is the wrong path to take
'Cause flowers open up by they own, and have grace
But whenever you smile I thank God and laugh
Just so I don't wander and take the wrong path
I love you like the grains of the sand that line shores
I love you like the way that a man would die for
I love you with compassion no one can corrupt
I'm struck with such a ration of love that can't budge
To me you don't belong, you're the world's and live free
A gift given just to unfurl and give peace
I think I might pray that you bloom afterall
And if the light stays then it's true we can't fall
[Chorus]
Life is just too beautiful for me to try and grasp
A butterfly that if you catch will only die instead
Why would I distract myself with that which lies ahead?
When all that I need to believe is love inside my head
You don't know that I love you, but that's fine with me
'Cause I'mma try to be what you need defiantly
And that's a selfless act but you've shown be you're so kind
I'll be there if you need me I hope that you don't mind
This goes beyond what the standard of together is
The leverage to shoot for the truth and never miss
This is real love and it's unconditional strength
The type that outnumbers all of the fish in the lake
The type that I don't even need to be witchu to feel
The light that's based on peace and so Jesus'll keep it real
Tonight I'll make you feel that a piece of your freedom's sealed
And rightly take the evil and leave it beaten and heal
We can't lose to doom if we thinkin' the same thing
And that proves that no one can break up the chain link!
I've said all that I need to say to make sense
So now it's up to God and the silence the say the rest
Hardware:
iMac G5, LTO Max-100 mixer, Shure SM58 microphone
Software:
Garageband 2.0.1
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Nice Lyrics &mdash 01/05/06 - 11:16:04 PM
Very well written lyrics although most rap fans will bash this one. "Too poetic" they will say. Poetic or not poetic, this track is a lot better than the 3.75 rating it has recieved. I can't vote and so can't help you on that but just want too bring your spirit up if it is bugging you. Who ever so vote-bashed your song is either a total asshole or a stuck up narrow minded prick.
Keep doing what you do. Peace. [ Reply to This ]
voted &mdash 01/05/06 - 11:25:43 PM
This may be all we need, too. &mdash 01/15/06 - 11:46:50 AM
Hey, nothing wrong about singing about a little spirituality. Rap is a style,
not a theme. Those who would think this is TOO poetic or too sanitized
can go look elsewhere to vent their psychotic vitriol or look for shock
effects. To stamp your mark in the rap world, I guess you have to make
your own identity and not just be one of the wannabe-Eminems.
So some idiot bombed you with 3's and 4's, I hear. Can't do much to
change the pathetic mind of that psycho who did that to you, but i'll give
you compensatory scores. You deserve better than this. [ Reply to This ]
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Keep doing what you do. Peace.
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