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| abstractreality said 1416 days ago (January 6th, 2006) | |
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Opinion It's tricky for me to not use loops. However, I'll use the comments I find useful for the next version. Thanks anyway! Check out my latest song called Drumatic-RnB Kit
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| screamalexz said 1413 days ago (January 9th, 2006) | |
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organize the loops are fine, maybe try and make them fit together a little better. it seems like it's alot of different ideas together, perhaps listen to it find an idea you like and try and base most the piece of that idea. maybe take another idea in here to put in the middle for a break. it seems to have the start of a few songs. but some great ideas. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| said 1387 days ago (February 4th, 2006) | |
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"Abstract/Experimental/FX" I think you have to chance the genre to "Abstract/Experimental/FX" Respectfully ----------- *Skean* An My Last Tune Being a Friend (Collab with The NightBird) |
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Corporal Beef
FIrst off ,I would try writing and performing the song without loops. Then I would focus on two, maybe three parts of the piece and create a cohesive thought with it. Abandoning the loops may very well free your mind up to create soundscapes (and dare I say melodies) that could only come from your head. As it is, I feel the piece is too jumbled and is not clear on what it is trying to convey. I've listened to some of your other work, so I'm confident this piece will evolve into something stronger. Good luck.