wow this is awkard

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through where, I don't know..... but a nice journey.

Jack

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Very creative, very well done. Way out of the genres in which I compose,
but it's done so well that it doesn't matter. I can still appreciate it because
it's a high quality song.

This is impressive.

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rad to the max! the production on this sizzles......great song, love the
unknown world of sleep. i'll tune in again for your next piece.........t

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wish i could do that - nice listen - thank you xxx

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very interesting choice of sounds.well structured.i think maybe the drums could have beat alittle harder in parts to add to the dramma and suspense .otherwise very nice tune..

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...but strangely hypnotic.

A nice contrast to your hardcore rock tracks.

Pretty darn cool.

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Whoaa..late sixties with a contemporary twist. Bonus points for originality. Well crafted and performed.

...forced from the places in between
turn nocturne ragman.....Very tasty focal hook there

Cool changes throughout. Awesome job

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I love the frequent ambiguity to what the key actually is (if there is
one). It gives a very nice contrast between the verses and the chorus
when the singing starts to be tuned and the bass line becomes more
obvious... although the guitar line is still halfway there enough to be a
little confusing. In the same respect, I quite enjoy the first bridge with
the detuned piano along with the bass still on the verge of being out of
tune but still clutching at cohesion.

Nice sound bed too... stylistically very electronic (still is something I'm
working on, not thinking of electronic music as a band). I aggree that
the drums could be little more prominant.... also remember than
anyone using anything except headphones, won't really be able to hear
the change in stereo position with those bass drum beats... bass
frequencies are less directional.... so to be heard properly in anything
other than headphones you have to exaggerate them alittle more than
you origially intended.

I'll say it again, I like the drifting between ambiguity and tonality.
Great track!

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Nice transitions.

Smooth atmosphere. Nice blend of style!

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this is awesome.

i wish this happened to me when i didn't sleep.

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halos around all the lights. Excellent vocals and production. Damn, this is a fine song you've made! Great job.

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live the chorus...

interesting and experimental. love the new direction.

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i love it i want to eat it i am hungry.....

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