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This is one of many new submissions that are just fragments that I would like feedback on. Tell me what you think and if there is potential.
The lyrics are from a poem in a poetry collection book that I have. Just an easy way to get some well written lyrics ; )
The lyrics are from a poem in a poetry collection book that I have. Just an easy way to get some well written lyrics ; )
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cleetis562002
I really dig the guitar work, amp up that electric and don't skimp on it, put
it out front and let it tell us the story. Some volume tweeks for texture
and post the lyrics and or tweek those as well. I could really get into this
song. I know I'm just a newbie here, but I like what I like.
Thanks for the op to hear your work,
Clee