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Just wanted my new girlfriend to know how much I like her.
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| afterfx said 1411 days ago (January 16th, 2006) | |
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Interesting mix! Thanks for taking the time to give a comprehensive critique. I appreciate the opinions for others when they are so constructive. --- "Just because your horse is dead is no reason to stop beating it" Check out my latest song called Since You've Been Around
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dreadmon
You've' got a lot of really different ideas here that create an intriguing vibe. The production sort of gets in the way of what you're trying to accomplish, I think. The right channel mono synth is way too loud, your natural voice is very likable, there are some areas that sound a little melody-deficient, like you're still composing it and not quite settled on a line. The higher voice, spoken and screamed, it's good as well, it seems over-compressed, though. Some of the parts here are fighting each other, like the guitar bits and the drums - the panning is good, but it often is a distraction from the main action, which is the story you're trying to tell. From the bits I could make out, it's really a steely, devilish little tune - I'd like to be able to fully get into it, and again, production attention will make this happen. Recap: Like the tune, the production is sort of a haze of smoke in the way of a really nice picture. Be encouraged!