Very trippy! You're definitely thinking outside the box. I like the programming and you've got serious emotion coming out of the vocals and lyrics. Now, I don't know if it was your intention to obscure the main lyrics with the sort of hushy-panned vox, but they're so obscuring, I can't really hear what's being sung/wailed in the background. I think a compromise could be reached with those panned vocals coming down a bit and then the lead vocal coming forward. It's a cool effect, it certainly conveys some of the emotions you've got going on. The very important things you're saying just get totally buried by the music and other voices. Flip that around and it will definitely stand out as a track more. Good work!

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but those ideas lack focus. I know that's partly what the
psychedelic genre is all about but all great songs in that genre are
still great songs in their own right. I think with some tightening up
this could be a very cool track.

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I like the wandering. The song feels like a moment in time. The keyboard riff that kicks the song off is dirty and sinewy and cool. I like how it hits on a few sour rones with the pitch shift before it resolves. I think the tempo is perfect to make this song so hypnotic.

If anything, I'd like to hear bigger production. Bigger hits on the drums and a deeper bass.

Like it a lot.

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This is a nice song but usually synths and analog beats are under the
techno heading. Nice array of repeating beats beatiful song.
(sorry about the pun I just slapped myself for that one)

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