I really like your style, your strong rhythmic acoustic guitar, your
mainstream drive and dramatic pacing, and the general lines of the
song. The lyrics are uniquely bland and generalized, with obvious
specific details that reside more in the head of the subject than in the
actual text, and that goes with the concept well, but is a little
frustrating to me as a listener (unless this was intended as a film score
song, in which case its rather perfect). Very interesting use of an
almost counterpoint vocal line, becuz it almost gets in the way,
creating this annoying confusion, like an argument inside your own
head, which I truly like as a concept. It also creates a great contrast to
when you sing alone, setting up the indecision of the ending, which is
superb. I like when you go high into your falsetto, by the way, don't
shy away from that, use it; its cool. Really nice thought thru track.

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