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| Rolo said 1405 days ago (January 20th, 2006) | |
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the songwriting is good... Thanks, but what do you want to say with "transparent synths"? You know, english is not my main language and sometimes i got a hard time figuring out some metaphors. Check out my latest song called Sempiterna Decepción
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| underdog. said 1405 days ago (January 20th, 2006) | |
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the songwriting is good... transparent meaning that they are blatantly synthesized but they are trying to sound real. your talent is obvious, however your sound in the beginning sounds a bit garage-bandish. Check out my latest song called The Prophet's Profits
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| paddler said 1405 days ago (January 20th, 2006) | |
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Listenin as I write Nice keyboards/piano intro.Has a dark feel to it wonder where it's gonna go.Spoken voice excellent.OK the vocals are perplexing me - almost sounds deep like crash test dummies or ramstein - not sure - is quite intriguing though.Would like to read the lyrics too.Drums excellent.Is very creative and dark.Now i turned the volume up and this song is pouring down over me like rain....In the right mood this could really kick some ass for me..like if I had alot of supressed anger I wanted to release.I enjoyed it.Cheerz Check out my latest song called Tiger Flame (Halloween Challenge)
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| selters said 1404 days ago (January 21st, 2006) | |
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interesting stuff man You got some interesting songwriting going on here. It sounds to me like there are som fx on the voice..Which i usually dont like, but it could bee it siuts this tune.I whish you posted the lyrics, they ar eimpossible to catch. But some of it sounds good. The songwriting, Very good! Check out my latest song called So Far (Out Of Reach)
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| The Composer said 1402 days ago (January 23rd, 2006) | |
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title Theres some pretty decent work done here, pretty decent song writing (could do with a bit more of the unexpected, but its still pretty good). I also like the combination of sounds you're using and how you're using them. Everything is also quite nicely placed... the stereo space it quite nice and wide which is also good. That all being said, some of your levels are a little out. I can't hear the bass in this song... I know its there, but its not audible. The distorted spoken voice is also a little grating... either because its too loud or theres a little too much top end in it (a little treble reduction would fix that). One last thing... and I'm guessing a little here... it sounds a little like your distorting your drum kit somehow... something thats taking the high end out of your cymbals and high hats a little. Since they're the main part that fits in the high frequency range and you are distorting the drums, it might be idea to have the high hats and cymbals playing on a different drum track... just so you can keep that high percussion where it should be. Nice work. Check out my latest song called 25 Minutes in a Japanese Restaurant (Readers Digest Version) (MJRF)
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| Rolo said 1402 days ago (January 23rd, 2006) | |
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title Thank you for the input. I think the problem of some levels are from the compression. I only compressed after the bounce, and that always changes something. I think i'll try again with the compressor on the master fader. --- "I've got a strategy, it's called whoop that ass!" -Quinton "RAMPAGE" Jackson Check out my latest song called Sempiterna Decepción
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| macgalver said 1243 days ago (July 1st, 2006) | |
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This is great Rolo, you've got an amazing ear for music. You get huge numbers from me. The idea with Garageband is it is GARAGEBAND. WTF? Sorry. I don't understand some people's snobbery. Your ideas in this are excellent. They are well conveyed. Totally well produced. Interesting, fresh. Reminds me of old Bauhaus. Thanks for sharing and making your music! love, kelli Check out my latest song called First Sight
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underdog.
but the synths are a bit transparent - almost as if they are meant ot
sound real. trick out your synths a bit in the beginning. your staccato
rhythm is sensational - and your lyrics are also good. in summary, good
song but be more selective in your synths.