This is nice and sweet Cipher. But a little to MIDI for my taste. It doesnt sound like a person plays the guitar here, is that right? That said, Its very sweet!! And i am sure your daughter will love it!!


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I think this song is great. The only thing you need now is some lyrics.
The melody totally brightened up my day. You are master of the midi

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Very sweet and a really pretty melody, but like selters said- it sounds a bit
too MIDI.

However, if you manage to get a real guitar to play this, you've got my
vote. and a high one to boot!

Again, a very sweet track.

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I just noticed the face of a wee child is this your wee sweetie in the
graphic Well I think what you composed here is really beautiful It sounds
inocent, playful, gentle and full of wonder. You have caught in the
compostion of your music without words your love and joy. Thankq for
sharing this kind regards laine*

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Cipher, this song is well-constructed and really communicates the joy
of being a father to a precious young lady. I have two daughters and a
son, and while they do drive me crazy sometimes, they are the most
precious things in the world to me.

Keep sharing. This is a very strong post. Yes, it's a little MIDI-
sounding, but very enjoyable anyway. I like the layering of textures
and melodies. Lots of thought went into this.

John


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maybe your versatility in your stuff is a way for you to balance your brain!

this is very sweet. would be interesting to hear that other crazy voice on
it! or maybe a child singing. or both!

definitely a fun little tune fit for the girl you love.

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oooh - i hit submit to early. i love the little double time melody at the end!

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Pretty song and such a beautiful tribute to your little one!

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I can see why this one would be your fav... it really has a good hook to it. The guitars rock. You have a really nice voice too... Yep... really catchy tune the lead on this just works.

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I copied the wrong message... what happened? Like I had written, nothing like sending some love to your daughter with a song. I have three daughters and three daughter love songs. Some times words are not enough. This is very special.

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Totally sweet. Love the shuffling happiness. Thought the lead flute part could have had more personality as a different sounds, something with more movement, dynamics. Altho I like the arpeggios at the end in that sound.

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