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ThatNation

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Here's a work in progress. What do you think...should I continue. Do you have lyrical ideas? A Genre?

I know it's all loops but I tried be as creative as possible with them. Leave me a comment!

If you see this....you should go ahead and check out the updated version.....
http://www.macjams.com/song/17330

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Hits: 635
Comments: 6
Fans: 0
Plays: 29
Downloads: 40
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Jan 22, 2006 - 10:47:37 AM
Last Updated: Jan 24, 2006 - 05:26:25 AM Last Played: Dec 10, 2007 - 11:39:22 AM

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Experimental (400), Work in Progress (12), ThatNation (4), Awesome! (1)

Hardware:

Powerbook G4 cuz im cool

Software:

Garageband

Comments

codystrum

codystrum said 1405 days ago (January 22nd, 2006)

yes continue
I like what is happening in this tune. The keys are great and the beat is a good fit. I like the guitarish sounding keys and then how it goes honky tonk. A lot of good ideas here. This tune could be used as an intro to a radio program show.

The only thing is that there is a bit of a crackle in the intro which is a tad distracting. I don't know if that comes from an instrument effect being set too high but I would check that in your track info.

Check out my latest song called My Pretty City (unplugged)

screamalexz	screamalexz said 1405 days ago (January 22nd, 2006)
	hmm i think it may be worth working on. it kind of has maybe a jazz feel? though that doesn't seem entirely right. love the talking at the end.. you should leave that in. i liked the guitar loop it had a nice rhythem to it. the way this is done it doesn't sound like loops. im not sure of any lyric ideas it could maybe be an instrumental Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

ThatNation	ThatNation said 1405 days ago (January 22nd, 2006)
	My intention was to create the most possibly unloopy song with all loops. I think I suceeded...and will continue to work on it Check out my latest song called Performance Anxiety

selters	selters said 1405 days ago (January 22nd, 2006)
	yeah! It sounded nice, nice to hear you talking in the end :D Check out my latest song called So Far (Out Of Reach)

said 1405 days ago (January 22nd, 2006)

Mellow '70's vibe
I like the feel of the song - reminds me very much of a mix of mid-60's
early '70's mellow jazzy rock vibe, almost like Ramsey Lewis in spots.
Then with more recent percussion effects on it.
I was thinking that it might be nice to end with the same cascading guitar
part that opens the song; kind of like opening a book and then closing a
book.
If someone were to add lyrics to this, you may want to go with an
arrangement that has fewer instruments so that the singer doesn't have to
compete with all the other sounds.

ThatNation	ThatNation said 1404 days ago (January 22nd, 2006)
	Mellow '70's vibe Interesting ideas. I shall execute them. (I dont mean kill, I mean do them. (no i dont mean that.) YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! --- - Dan - Check out my latest song called Performance Anxiety

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Experimental music is any music that challenges the commonly accepted notions of what music is. There is an overlap with avant-garde music. John Cage was a pioneer in experimental music and defined and gave credibility to the form. As with other edge

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