I like what is happening in this tune. The keys are great and the beat is a good fit. I like the guitarish sounding keys and then how it goes honky tonk. A lot of good ideas here. This tune could be used as an intro to a radio program show.

The only thing is that there is a bit of a crackle in the intro which is a tad distracting. I don't know if that comes from an instrument effect being set too high but I would check that in your track info.

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i think it may be worth working on. it kind of has maybe a jazz feel? though that doesn't seem entirely right. love the talking at the end.. you should leave that in. i liked the guitar loop it had a nice rhythem to it. the way this is done it doesn't sound like loops. im not sure of any lyric ideas it could maybe be an instrumental

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was to create the most possibly unloopy song with all loops. I think I suceeded...and will continue to work on it

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It sounded nice, nice to hear you talking in the end :D

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I like the feel of the song - reminds me very much of a mix of mid-60's
early '70's mellow jazzy rock vibe, almost like Ramsey Lewis in spots.
Then with more recent percussion effects on it.
I was thinking that it might be nice to end with the same cascading guitar
part that opens the song; kind of like opening a book and then closing a
book.
If someone were to add lyrics to this, you may want to go with an
arrangement that has fewer instruments so that the singer doesn't have to
compete with all the other sounds.


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Interesting ideas. I shall execute them. (I dont mean kill, I mean do them. (no i dont mean that.)

YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!

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