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Another update in this song I am working on. I thought all lyrics hope was lost until my friend was over tonight and we rocked this one out. It's cool....tell me if you like the bass at the very end....and please COMMENT on those vocals
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Lyrics
Where am I going
how am I gonna get there
This river keeps on flowing
Going down I don't seem to care
Because my one way ticket has been canceled
seems I can't get through till I fix the delay
and still it's just the beginning
this is what happens when you run away
This is a work in progress x3
still keeps moving away
how am I gonna get there
This river keeps on flowing
Going down I don't seem to care
Because my one way ticket has been canceled
seems I can't get through till I fix the delay
and still it's just the beginning
this is what happens when you run away
This is a work in progress x3
still keeps moving away
t-bone
hey, like the tune.....this is my second listen..good vocal/melody ..maybe
you could put an effect on the voice to give it more depth, or add a
second voice......it needs to have a more heaviness to it..........I thought
the bass at the end was good, maybe you could include some bass
towards the begininng, do you use a midi controller? if not you might be
able to scribe a bass line using the shorthand method rather than use a
loop.......I also thought the ending to be a bit abrupt, go ahead and come
to a complete stop, but leave the recording on to give your listener a bit
of silence before hitting the stop record button.............thanks for the
tune,,.............t