You got some great production on this track. It sounds professional to
me.I love the effects your using, everything seems right in place. I love
that main bass riff. It's pretty sick. The vocals sound great too.

It seems like the song could stand to be shorter. There's definiltey a
point where I felt that I heard what I needed to hear, but the song just
kinda of started to be too repetitious. But that's a very small gripe for
an otherwise great tune.
Keep it up!

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The banana! It's quite tasty! Hmmm chicken intestines and toenail voodoo ! I liked it like I like a song that I like to like!

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I like how the voice on this one reflects exactly what it's saying. An
amount of desperation and confusion, the words coming and repeating as
if you really can't think, very spontaneous feeling. I'm really digging your
vocal stuff... I also enjoy the direction you're moving into. More funky and
also with a dark flare to it.

Downloaded. Fanned.

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we used to joke in the band that performaces were influenced by a
good looking woman walking in front of the stage. we called it nervous
sexual energy and you have captured it! I want to play this for all my
old band mates who want to relive that experience. great stuff

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we used to joke in the band that performaces were influenced by a
good looking woman walking in front of the stage. we called it nervous
sexual energy and you have captured it! I want to play this for all my
old band mates who want to relive that experience. great stuff

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Thank you, that's actually a better compliment than many of the other
comments I got. But everything I read about a song is influencing my
progression with other songs.

I think "Show me" has a certain roughness, a style of being unfinished, but
that is the very reason bugging me. It has a lot of energy under the hood,
but it would need a little brush up to release this energy and bring in a little
bit more development towards the ending. I agree with one of the comments
that it goes on with the same level of power, and that is a little bit in conflict
with what the song is all about. I think what it should be like is more like a
slow-mo explosion. It should be tension expanding in energy, not continue
on the same level it reached at some point.

So I'll work on this again and then perhaps repost it. Feel free to play it to
your band mates. I am more than honored.

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Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Respectfully
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Skean

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