Sad (revised)

Doadars Uncle

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A progression.

I addressed some issues from the last version. I extended it...in a different way.

The center parts consist of a tune inspired by one of my daughter's piano books. There is also a backdrop I used on one of my other tunes, "Dark."

I think the mix has improved. However, things would go well to have a stretch of time to work on it! I'm sure most of you understand.

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Lyrics

Sad
I was in error, I was a fool
Sorry
I wish I could change things
Goodbye

Wrong
How many times I've been wrong
Worry
It takes me to a bad place
Goodbye

On
What choice do I have
Steps
I can't go on
Blind
Goodbye

I need time
Leave me alone
Have no choice
Going home

Song Stats

Hits: 951
Comments: 24
Fans: 1
Plays: 126
Downloads: 66
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Uploaded: Jan 26, 2006 - 04:24:17 PM
Last Updated: Jan 28, 2006 - 09:08:14 AM Last Played: Feb 11, 2009 - 02:32:54 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Keywords:

Sad (148), Goodbye (33)

Hardware:

Fender Acoustic, Ibanez Electric, G4 dual 1Gig

Software:

GB1, MidiKeys

Comments

DOS	DOS said 1395 days ago (January 26th, 2006)
	Everything is good but Vocals need work... I love the strings, and guitar -Kevin Check out my latest song called My Revenge To The World

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	Everything is good but Thanks man. Vocals have always been a difficulty for me. Thanks for the comments! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

DJ-SD	DJ-SD said 1395 days ago (January 26th, 2006)
	good stuff good stuff man. It was definately interesting. keep it up Check out my latest song called Marching Anthem

DJ-SD	DJ-SD said 1395 days ago (January 26th, 2006)
	good stuff good stuff man. It was definately interesting. keep it up Check out my latest song called Marching Anthem

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	good stuff Thanks for dropping by! I appreciate that! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

Joshosh	Joshosh said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	funky Very different, but cool vibe. It's artistic value is very interesting. Almost indie rock, but not quite, then it is, etc. Wow. Just changed completely...each part is cool and imtriguing. Fun listen. Very unique. Check out my latest song called These Few Words

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	funky Glad you like the progression! Thanks for the comments! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

alanfraser	alanfraser said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	Courageous! The changes are radical but reasonable. The tone on the lead guitar was more than sweet. I wish the vocal tone / clarity on the first segment had been at the same level as the close as it was extremely difficult to make out what you were singing at the outset. All in all, a fascinating tune! Check out my latest song called It's For You w/Mystery Lady

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	Courageous! Thanks Man, Still a work in progress, I guess. With the vocals, I discovered sitting up straight or even standing improved my diction and projection...still learning! Thanks for the listen! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

selters

selters said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)

Good work!
"Fender Acoustic, Ibanez Electric," This is a bit opposite to me, and that is cool! This is a freaky tune! The vocals are very good and creative. the song improves when the sudden change comes. But when it changes once again i think its a bit, I dont know, but i guess i just dont like that Genre you were playing in that part. And then it changes again and again once more, the last change was cool, its good when the vocals are back! Good work, but a bit to much for me!!

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Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	Good work! I'm glad you appreciate the "freakiness" of it! I think my realization after I posted it was that the transitions were inadequate. I wanted the segments to be different, but perhaps they are too incongruous. Thanks for the visit! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

	said 1395 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	I think there are some interesting ideas here. I like the initial chord progression. I think you need to find some more layers that would help to tie it together better. I wish I could indentify what those layers should be. :)

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1394 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	I think there are some interesting ideas Thanks for the listen! I agree. It's a puzzle that deserves time... --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

chikoppi

chikoppi said 1394 days ago (January 27th, 2006)

Different place
I like the addition of the bass. I think you could spread the lead vocals
a little more with chorus or stereo separation (though I like the
panning effect of "what choice do I have").

Wha?! That's a crazy new middle section! I dig it from a creativity
standpoint, but I think it violates that hazy, murky character you
established in the original. Don't get me wrong, I like this version, but I
also liked the very succinct emotion of the original.

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Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1394 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	Different place I'll have to work on that spreading thing. I thought the panning helped bring out the disjointed feeling of the song. I might change the middle. I do think that I need some sort of movement from the self loathing part to the selfish part. --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

aclarke	aclarke said 1394 days ago (January 27th, 2006)
	Quirky and offbeat And pretty damn cool. Very trippy song- almost like an aural hallucination. Sounds like art rock to me. Bass is a great addition- like that I can feel it as much as hear it. Check out my latest song called Ballad of The Little Tiki

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1394 days ago (January 28th, 2006)
	Quirky and offbeat Thanks man! I'm discovering the importance of bass! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

underdog.	underdog. said 1389 days ago (February 1st, 2006)
	nine. title says it. -u. Check out my latest song called The Prophet's Profits

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1389 days ago (February 1st, 2006)
	nine. Thanks for stopping! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

composerclark

composerclark said 1364 days ago (February 26th, 2006)

lots going on here
There are lots of things going on here; it's like a medley of different
tunes. The first one has a disturbing, haunting quality to it; well done. I
personally would disagree with the comment that the vocals need work;
they're a big part of the overall feel. Not sure why it changes so much (?).
The up tempo instrumental towards the end is completely different, but
great!

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Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1348 days ago (March 14th, 2006)
	lots going on here Thanks for your comments! I thought I would run through a process of emotion, just to check it out. Who knows? --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

listen	listen said 1346 days ago (March 16th, 2006)
	incredible poetry the things one said versus what one thinks... interesting change in the middle... I checked to see if I was still listening to the same song but it fits... Check out my latest song called Bossy girl in the staircase

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 1344 days ago (March 18th, 2006)
	incredible poetry Thanks for the kind words! Your latest, "like Andy Warhol" is very good! --- We have a cat and a fish. Our fish behaves very well... Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

listen	listen said 1346 days ago (March 16th, 2006)
	incredible poetry the things one said versus what one thinks... interesting change in the middle... I checked to see if I was still listening to the same song but it fits... Check out my latest song called Bossy girl in the staircase

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Name: Doug CN

I appreciate original music. I've played guitar a bit for 30 years. Singing is fun! MacJams helps a lot! Good friends, good music. ... [see more]

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