The Mic and Mix on the Very Fine Piano and Vocal Presentation are
both Clear and Clean - Pleasing, and Captivating.
The Fine Vocal Timbre and control of Tone and Phrasing turns against
you though in a burst of Irony, however: As the Lyric being presented
is not of the same caliber as the Voice and creates a contrast. That is,
the Lyric, a personal Musing regarding a friend absent, is a bit too
loose in structure to convey what it is that You're Feeling. I'm Sure that
it is Totally clear to you, but the image structure is too personal to you
- the relationship between the images is not so clear to the listener.
[Any written text that contains seven elipses is going to require some
"filling in", as those are more notes to the author than the listener/
reader, No?
I find the overall presentation (esp Vocal) quite fine: (Voice, Piano, Mix)
and fondly reminiscient of MR. Jackson Browne. The mic-ing of the
guitar seems to lack resonance, as maybe you were avoiding cycle/
ambiance conflict with the piano, but should be re-mic-ed and panned
to a location that avoids the conflict.
In all, it is such a good piece, with some flat-out superb parts, that the
minor flaws are that much more visible (the old "damned by your own
success" thing).
Fine Track that could be Dynamite.
My two-cents.
Best,
rtc
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