This song has morphed into its third form, the Rollo remix, and it is
equally interesting. The new treatment gives it an enigmatic atmosphere
and the male vocals stand out a little bit more than the previous version.
Allanah's vocals are haunting and Aclarke's parts have a touch of pleasant
eerieness. A very complimentary mixture of vocals with a unique master
mix. Still a little too much reverb for me, but overall a job well done by
all four of you, guys.

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I liked this. It's different. At times I felt there was too many vocals at
once making it difficult to pick out the main song message. When the
drums came in I was really expecting a deep bass drum to carry the
ambience and was a little dissapointed when it didnt. I think it needs it.
I also feel, because of it's slow pace that the song needs to be alot
longer - maybe with some instrumental fills. I really only got into it
near the end.

Otherwise, I really liked it and gave it an overall 8 - sparked off some
ideas for a song I havent worked on for ages actually!

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Thanks for the comment, but this is not the final version. I posted this one as a
"work in progress" . The final version will be a little different, and the mix still
needs some adjustments. But I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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"I've got a strategy, it's called whoop that ass!" -Quinton "RAMPAGE" Jackson

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There's a lot going on here to tickle the mind. Looking forward to the final
version.

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good work all of you!

not my typical cup of tea, but i really enjoyed this!

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It reminds me of Enigma! I dig! But not a grave! It got better towards the end! I like the build up! I already have my clothes off so that must be a good thing! Mmmmm! Carrots! Nice one Cartoonie and Ronnie Rollo gang o' four! Sounds like a Porn title! Even better! Over out! Chowda and bisquits!

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this has got a sweetly developing vibe, love the work that y'all have put into this. I agree that it's a bit busy and crowded sonically in spots - but again, I know that it's a work in progress. would love to hear the drums come up and really stick those hits. Looking forward to moh!

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early in the morning (for me) with my coffee - hmmm - did someone drop something in there?? 'Curiouser and curiouser!' cried Alice and then she took another bite from that side of the mushroom... thank you for sharing x

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it's really relaxing, and i enjoyed listening to it:D great job:)

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Quite ambient. Reminds me of n all-night auto trek across the open
plains with AM radio stations fading in and out. It has a dreamy quality.

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