the idea, the song and the performance is very good. but the mix is
fatale. try to keep the guitar less saturated (in volume) and get more
pressence to the drums

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yeah, this is down and dirty, bro - first off, I really got into the spirit of this. The guitar is nice and gritty, the mouth harp adds spice, you've got a great voice for this - love the breaks! The bass is compelling, it sounds a little muffled and the drums are way buried in the mix, so it's kind of hard to really get a feel for what you're doing. You've dialed in the voice really good, nice slight slapback. The meter is a little loose here and there, but you've cleaned up the stops pretty well. As far as the story - hell yeah (sorry, had to) - what rocker can't relate? Towards the end, the slide gets a little out of hand and should definitely be reined in a bit so that you don't oversatuate the mix. This one rocked me!

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