....how you come up with something that seems like its been recorded with a melody and a vocal on top, and for some reason it dissapeared when you posted it... If there where no such thing when you did this, I must say you did marvellous on making a tune that is a thrill to make some sexy lyrics to. Very cool.

Cool that you let this door stand open to others to contribute to. I look forward to hear the next version...

You pour out a great rock'n roll energy, almost as if it was grabbed direct from the "brit" stage in the seventhies.

Way cool.

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well the lyrics i came with seemed kind of lame, so i thought it would be fun to
see if anyone dug the tune enough to attempt to post some lyrics to it. i'll be
posting another one today, im just finishing up the mixing on it today. and if i
get real ambitious im gonna post a few accoustic tunes i've competed....

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I want your love, I want your love, I want your love,
I want your love, I want your love,
I want your love, I want your love, I want your love,
I want your love, I want your love, I want your love, (repeat)

(bridge) Could you talk your tongue from inside my ear.
Or do you need to do that to keep me near?

A diamond ring's, a pretty thing, a thing that makes
you want to sing, I want to sing, I want to sing
A song so sweet, about your eyes,
and the way you make me sing You make me sing

(bridge) Could you talk your tongue from inside my ear.
Or do you need to do that to hide your fear?

I want your car, I want your house, I want your love,
I need a ride, a place to stay,
I want your car, I want your house, I want your love,
I want your love, I want your love, I want your love,

(Use the words as they fit, or not. A place to start from)



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