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The first love,
the first fight,
the first everything...
Still working on this one.
Vocals: Me
Acoustic Guitar: Joe Stansberry
Cymbal: Me on my keyboard
the first fight,
the first everything...
Still working on this one.
Vocals: Me
Acoustic Guitar: Joe Stansberry
Cymbal: Me on my keyboard
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Lyrics
THE FIRST
Stacey K. Black
You're looking to me as if I have all the answers
I'm searching for clues myself
is there a message written across the sky?
Maybe we should ask somebody else.
You're looking to me as if I can change the future
I'm just trying to find my way
I connect the dots
I paint by numbers everyday.
You see it in my eyes it's left unspoken
this is The First heart I've broken.
You wanna find out if I know if we'll survive this.
Well your guess is as good as mine.
Does anybody have a rulebook?
The only thing that will tell is time.
You see it in my eyes this shameful token
yours is The First heart I've broken.
Your tears leave me
unbalanced, speechless mired in duality
my fears warn me
that I could lose you for all eternity.
You're looking to me as if I can read your mind now
I just want to understand
is there a reason you abandoned me?
Is there a safe place for me to land?
I see it in your eyes it's left unspoken
mine isn't The First heart you've broken.
Stacey K. Black
You're looking to me as if I have all the answers
I'm searching for clues myself
is there a message written across the sky?
Maybe we should ask somebody else.
You're looking to me as if I can change the future
I'm just trying to find my way
I connect the dots
I paint by numbers everyday.
You see it in my eyes it's left unspoken
this is The First heart I've broken.
You wanna find out if I know if we'll survive this.
Well your guess is as good as mine.
Does anybody have a rulebook?
The only thing that will tell is time.
You see it in my eyes this shameful token
yours is The First heart I've broken.
Your tears leave me
unbalanced, speechless mired in duality
my fears warn me
that I could lose you for all eternity.
You're looking to me as if I can read your mind now
I just want to understand
is there a reason you abandoned me?
Is there a safe place for me to land?
I see it in your eyes it's left unspoken
mine isn't The First heart you've broken.
Komrade K
First let me say I really like you voice - you've a good dynamic range -
and I had a sense here of some considerable vocal power held in reserve.
The tune's sweet and I liked the lyrics (and the idea behind them).
Perhaps you need to work on the accompaniment a little - I like the
understated approach but maybe a little more variety in the guitar styling
is called for. Alternatively, dropping the guitar slightly in the mix and
bringing up the mid and bass frequencies might be all that's needed.
Enjoyed this a lot - welcome to MacJams!
KK