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| said 1369 days ago (February 9th, 2006) | |
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Mare imbrium Cute story to entertain the kids. You missed an opportunity to call the horse a mare...which would rhyme with everything else. |
| Audiologic said 1368 days ago (February 9th, 2006) | |
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Mare imbrium but the Mayor already had a mare :) Ben Check out my latest song called Dessert Parade
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| caroline said 1369 days ago (February 9th, 2006) | |
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awww how lovely to hear your voice, this story, all of it - thank you for posting it - i just love to hear the voices of the 'silent' ones!! xoxox Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf
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| Audiologic said 1368 days ago (February 9th, 2006) | |
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awww Funny the influence people can have on you and what they can make you do ;). Thanks, for the comments, Caroline. Ben Check out my latest song called Dessert Parade
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| caroline said 1368 days ago (February 10th, 2006) | |
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awww hehehe - suddenly remembered this... 11 was a racehorse. 22 was 1 2. 11 1 1 race... 22 1 1 2!! xoxo Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf
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| Einarus said 1368 days ago (February 10th, 2006) | |
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You don't really sound... ...*anything* like I had imagined, heh. :) I had actually written 'quite the comment' for you but then pressed the "post comment" button on another song page resulting in nothing here, but a double-poster elsewhere. Aren't I the smart one? Anyway - a nice little story and it's fun to be able to put a voice to the screen name! Nice work. Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours
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| perceptualvortex said 1365 days ago (February 12th, 2006) | |
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Nice little poem. My personal preference might be to add lots of echo. Plus chop it up and play sections in reverse. And add some funky beats and synths. Um, maybe that's why I don't do vocals! Anyway, that was a cute little Dr. Seuss-esque story. Check out my latest song called Machine Man (w Beastie Boys)
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Like I said, it's a cute, cheeky little story. Makes me grin from ear to ear.
You have an innocence here... spiked with just enough humor to be
entertaining. ;)