I half expected the song to seque into a dance track about 1/3 way in. A funky electronic groove or house beat would have been really interesting. Mix in some ethereal female vocalizations, and you'd have a complete song.

The sounds you have are earthy and the voice wll serve as great counterpart.

Nice... so far.

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well,i suppose.
i wasn't really going for a dance track,but now that i think on it,that
might not be a bad idea.
if anybody would like to do the vocals,please let me know.
since i can't really do female vocals...
ha.

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the weird croaking sounds.

But have to admit this is outside anything I normally listen to. My
definition of music is "organized noise," which I copped from someone, so
this fits, but it ends to quickly, and I just don't get it.

It deserves higher scores than it got, since at least on production it seems
well done.

I didn't vote, and won't, since I already confessed, outside what I know.

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but wouldn't know where to begin in terms of adding to it. I'm sure
you'll find a techno head to play with though. :)

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cjorgensen,it ends quickly because it isn't done.
i had a "music fart" or whatever you want to call it,and thought i'd post
it on here to see if anybody had any ideas on it.
thanks for the comment though.
and themasses,it's cool.
i know there's not a ton of people on here who do this sort of thing.
thanks for giving it a listen anyways.

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Yes, a house beat and some funkadelic voices would be the way for
this to evolve.

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