no more me anymore (demo)

urbnite

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i was feeling quite stuck with a song i've been working on, so i stopped and wrote this instead. written and recorded in less than an hour. so don't expect too much.

felt the need to purge. thought some early-90s powerchord simplicity would help. excuse the blunders, i didn't really rehearse. just had to get something done in a short amount of time before the new cats went crazy outside the music room door.

but it's not that bad, so i'll share it with you. i feel like selters will like it! :)

oh, and i just realized it's valentine's day... so pretend i knew that already and think of it as a happy love song!

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Lyrics

you came walking into the room
my stomach flipped onto the floor
and i knew pretty soon
there'd be no more me anymore

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore

you pulled up, valet parked my heart
i'd been sitting there, broken since four
i should have known right from the start
there'd be no more me anymore

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore

the way you move me
the way you shake me
the way you move me
the way you shake me
down and down and down
into to the ground

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore

then you left me, quick as you came
i was just some stupid game
your twenty-two minutes of fame
now there's no more me anymore

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore

Song Stats

Hits: 1032
Comments: 25
Fans: 1
Plays: 107
Downloads: 31
Votes: 6
Uploaded: Feb 14, 2006 - 01:25:33 AM
Last Updated: Feb 16, 2006 - 06:18:17 PM Last Played: Jul 29, 2009 - 08:23:24 PM

Song License

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Song Actions

Keywords:

no more me (1), gone (26), fame (12), flipped (1), floor (4), valet (2), start (4), don't (19)

Hardware:

um. let's see. not that it matters because this is a one mic, one track song. but:

seagull
me

bluetube dp
luna

blah

Software:

Comments

macgalver	macgalver said 1379 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
	as is is good to me. May I call you Neil Young? I really dig this song. I think it's perfect. You've got a killer voice.--thanks for posting, kelli Check out my latest song called First Sight

urbnite	urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	as is is good thanks kelli - you can call me whatever you'd like! well, within reason, maybe. :) Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

drakonis	drakonis said 1379 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
	Lofidelityrelationship Pretty good for a one-mic get-it-out song... I liked the lyrics the best, and think this might be a good song to build the chords/backing on and re-record. Definitely a lonely seagull song, but sometimes those are necessary to sing. ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child

urbnite	urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	Lofidelityrelationship thanks drak - yeah, it was quite necessary. and i think i did end up with something that can be built upon. we'll see if i get around to it, though. ha! Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

caroline	caroline said 1379 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
	at last - he has a voice!!! great stuff darren - it gets better and better - happy love song? i think not but thanks for sharing xoxo Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf

urbnite	urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	at last - he has a voice!!! who has a what? seriously though - i mean thank you. ;) happy love song? never thought of that... hmmm... maybe i'll try that again one day. xoxox Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

Einarus	Einarus said 1379 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
	Nice... ...especially considering this to be an hour's worth of work! I look forward to hearing further versions of this. Definately promising! Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours

urbnite	urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	Nice... thanks ein - maybe i'll get around to making further versions of this... seems like it's calling for my electric. we'll see... Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

outlier	outlier said 1379 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
	good song to end a possible rut sometimes when you're in a rut, and it seems like there's no way out, you just come up with something that almost writes itself, and then all of a sudden ... no rut. plus, i like this song! btw - not implying that you're in a rut, just the comments about being stuck on a song rung true with me. Check out my latest song called sprung

urbnite	urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	good song to end a possible rut it was a bit of a rut! yeah - we all get stuck. i guess i was lucky enough to find a way out. ;) thanks out! Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

loyd vader	loyd vader said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	crazy horse??? killer voice dude.......love to hear this fully rocked out............ Check out my latest song called im not lazy, im just tired

urbnite	urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	cinnamon horse??? maybe i'll have to rock out then... if there's demand for it and all. i love all these neil young references... i don't really listen to him, so i find it really interesting. thanks mr. vader! Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

selters

selters said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)

esy going!
I like this song! Because its not tight! Killer Chorus on this! It is subtle, but yet agressive! I can hear though that you are not doing a performance as blistering as i know you can, But i assume thats quite normal.. The first recording always has something special, but also some rough edges :). I love your voice, and im looking forward to hear this again1

Check out my latest song called So Far (Out Of Reach)

urbnite

urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)

esy going!
thanks selters - i thought you'd appreciate the quick and dirty recording... i thought of you as i did it...

yeah, i'm sure i could do a better performance now that i've rehearsed the song - i didn't know if i even liked it when i recorded it... now i see that there's maybe potential in its simplicity, so maybe i'll redo it at some point.

Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

mandimonkee	mandimonkee said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	... For something your not given 100% to, it's great. love to hear what it sounds like when it's cleaned up Check out my latest song called Regression (collab w/Moses)

urbnite	urbnite said 1379 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	... thanks mandi! i'll let ya know if i rock it out. Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

	said 1378 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
	A good song Great playing and the voice fit well to this LOVE song. Sincerely ---- Skean Check this Being a Friend (Collab with The NightBird) At Bedtime

urbnite	urbnite said 1377 days ago (February 16th, 2006)
	A good song LOVE song? what's that? i only write sad songs damnit! lol nah, it's both! thanks for the kind words skean Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

cjhoose	cjhoose said 1377 days ago (February 16th, 2006)
	great lyrics They're like candy without the sweet and sugary. As always, guitar sounds great. Check out my latest song called Julia

urbnite	urbnite said 1377 days ago (February 17th, 2006)
	great lyrics mmmm... sour candy! thanks cj! Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

ChrisSly	ChrisSly said 1377 days ago (February 16th, 2006)
	Not Neil Young... but David Byrne. All the way. If this is a demo, get the full version worked out, 'cause it's pretty cool and can only get better. Check out my latest song called La Valse Final Waltz

urbnite	urbnite said 1377 days ago (February 17th, 2006)
	Not Neil Young... i've gotten the david byrne reference before... interesting. ;) yeah, maybe i'll do a real one... time will tell. Check out my latest song called Everything's Perfect

Macaudion	Macaudion said 1342 days ago (March 24th, 2006)
	Well It's a treasure trove Dion Check out my latest song called 123 iGetU

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