The background sounds are reminiscent of my daily train ride as I ride
the commuter train into downtown on my way to work.

I think that you are going for some sort of ambience with this one, and
I give you props for achieving that.

As the track stands now, there isn't a lot for me to grasp onto, and
perhpaps that is because as you mention, it is unfinished. I can
imagine a melodic line over the top of everything, or I can imagine it in
a similar fashion as it stands, with more ambiance throughout.

In any case, I do remain here wondering how you perhaps imagine it?

Great start to something.......not sure what it may become.

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Cheers, wasn't sure which direction to go to be honest but will try the melody
and the ambience and see where they take me. Cheers for the positive feedback.

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ACWAT - A Circle Within A Triangle

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just needs another/primary voice. Great trip so far.

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Cheers.

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ACWAT - A Circle Within A Triangle

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You've got some good sounds in here, and it has the beginnings of a
good Glitch track.

Right now what you have is a linear development: basic rythm, then add a
bass, then add some high synth, subtract bass. I think it needs to be
structurally more interesting. Add and subtract one or two more sounds,
then bring everything together at the end?

But I like the general sound of what you have here.

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Perhaps some real train concrete sounds? not so sure about the
delayed guitar/harp sounds, what do I know I always want more
concrete sounds and dirt... oh well. Like it though, intregued to hear
the final version... i'd quite like to add some processed field recordings
to it myself.
Good stuff.

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