well, i'd been fretting over what music to have playing during our
valentine dinner tonite. this should complement the balogna sandwiches
nicely. you should consider putting together a presentation to run by the
folks at Hallmark, as I could really see this fitting in nicely with their line
of musical cards.

now, if you're lucky enough to find someone who is not into the whole
concept of buying into all the commercial mumbo jumbo associated with
days like today, i say hold on, and hold on tight.

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Once it picks up the singing it gets going. Not a fan off the voice intro.
Also, you swear like a little kid. You don't seem used to doing it. Heh.

I think you should add in more lines about what you get for your card and
chocolates. You have the "stay in my bed," but I think you could play with
these ideas a bit. Just saying, gold bracelet with a diamond bell...night
could be pretty special. Wrote the poem, bought the balloons, you better
get more than a card.

Ha! I liked it.

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Thanks for the comment... But this was a song I wrote for a girl I really like but
the song was a complete joke and was not suppose to be taken seriously... The
voice in the beginning of the song was suppose to be a Radio DJ who is trying to
tell guys to be romantic and the whole song is suppose to be a spoof on
Valentines Day being so romantic. I wrote this song to her because we had only
been dating for only a week before Valentines Day and it was my way of saying
that I like her. By the way her and her friends at the office were cracking up that
I sent it to her.

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How sarcastic. Nice.

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