you will be a great asset around these parts and thank you coz i've taken a copy of this one! xoxo

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Although, I don't normally go for this kind of music, I can tell that you've
got very good song-writing and performing skills. I don't mind the high
notes that much (although one seems to be accompanied by distortion,
IIRC). This has a very live feel and you seem to be some distance from the
mic. I wouldn't mind a more intimate presentation of the song where you
sounded closer.

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I really dig this kind of sincere acoustic playing. Good energy on the guitar, and very nicely sung. You could captivate the coffeehouse audience with this one! Nice job.

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I can't easily make out the words, which is important in this type of
song. The production is a little rough, but it's a decent guitar and
voice, production.

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I can't easily make out the words, which is important in this type of
song. The production is a little rough, but it's a decent guitar and
voice, production.

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good stuff man, nice voice. i too have trouble making out some of the
lyrics -- too many years of Marshall stacks on 11. but this is full of
emotion and 'realness'. thanks for sharing.

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cool one

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This is an interesting bit of songwriting. You have a nice acoustic style
and a good vocal range. Be careful with those high notes... don't hurt
yourself.

One suggestion... while you don't necessarily have to use it in your
actual mix, it's always a good idea to play to a metronome or drum
track to keep your song from wandering into too much free-form
tempo. It comes in *very handy* should you ever decide to embellish
your arrangement of this --- or any other --- recording.

BTW, don't look now, but I've pinched your guitar. How's that for
*ruthless*? ;-)

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