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Song about my life in 1999.
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| VicDiesel said 1380 days ago (February 16th, 2006) | |
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Earnest The song seems to have an arc that goes from the regrets to the joys of your place in life at that time, which to me is its saving grace. It sounds like a very personal document, and I normally have a hard time listening to something this earnest, but the way it ends nicely ties up the whole story. Cool. And kudos for posting it in the first place. I could never do that. Check out my latest song called Desert Stars
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| Peter Greenstone said 1378 days ago (February 18th, 2006) | |
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Sweet song I really like this. I like the way you structured the lyrics, unfolding the picture. Very touching. Very nicely performed too. The simple arrangement sounds really nice. Decent mix/recording. I'd like to hear more variation in the song though, some layering and alternative deliveries in the vocals. Maybe bring in another element to the later verses to keep it growing a little. Perhaps some selective harmonies here and there. Overall, I think you have a great tune here; it just needs a little more development to keep it fresh and to help frame the lyrics. Perhaps even come up with a one-time bridge that breaks the pattern for a time before returning to the pattern structure. Check out my latest song called From Nothing
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tbivans
This was a nice, honest, and kind song, if not the most exciting thing that ever heard. The lyrics were extremely straight forward but not quite poetic. I can definitely relate to the husband and father sentiments and they almost brought a tear to my eye even if the song itself as a whole didn't quite excite me.