Some of your other songs seemed a bit melodramatic or perhaps a bit too personal for a third party listener but this one has more of a universal tone. I think that has more to do with the nature of the lyrics than the theme of the song. Your lyrics here strike a good balance of getting your feelings across and making them accessible.

Really good melody and phrasing on the vocals. The transition into the chorus was very nice to listen to. My only criticism is that the vocals are too soft in places..you may need to remix and really hit the vocals hard in some spots. Also..some backround vocals harmonizing in the chorus would sound nice as well.

There are alot of people out there with better chops or trying to be daring and innovative but this song is definitley one of the more enjpyable listening experiences I have had on on this board.

Its too bad more people are not commenting..quite a few have already downloaded this song so you would think they would take the time to say something.

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terrific chorus. even without many words to connect things, the melody
makes up for everything and then excels the song forward.



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