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Egyptian Riddim [Explicit] by karkhaz [Email]
Genre: Hip Hop-Rap

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Hits: 722
Comments: 13
Votes: 4
Plays: 180
Last Played: Sep 05, 2008 - 04:17:20 PM
Downloads: 28
Fans: 1
Uploaded: Feb 19, 2006 - 03:01:56 PM
Last Updated: Feb 18, 2006 - 03:06:28 PM
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Description:
This is work in progress... a beat that i am makin with a couple of friends. @ da moment it is only me rappin in it (the higher pitched voice is my voice, but up an octave).
The chorous is still not recorded yet, and i need 2 put in the last verse... tell me what u think!
Kazzers

Lyrics:
Bring the beat back

- I see this girl
A real pretty girl
When her hips start to move
she likes to shake the whole world

All the mans used 2 stop
look and stare
she has a pretty little face
and a booty it was rare

But im tellin u son,
she aint the 1
even tho she got the beuaty
and a very nice bum

She will set ur heart arace
at an incredible pace
and leave u in the dust
with nuthin 2 chase

u got to get the girl
whos got the right mind
sum1 u can grow old with
and call 'mine'

i may not be experienced
or wise
but i know how 2 keep my eyes
on that prize

i meesed it all up
and now its all gone
and im sittin here wonderin
what i did wrong

1 minute in my life
i was just good cruisin
but now i can feel
that my heart is bruisin

Im finished
i cant c how shes out of my life
now i know
at the end of my tunnel
there is no light

...so bring the beat back

[chorus]
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i can feel it &mdash 02/19/06 - 06:00:31 PM
there is something here, i think it could use a little something more
going on instrumentally, your voice is clipped in a few parts...but as
you say this is a work in progress i'll look forward to seeing the
updated version

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Def &mdash 02/19/06 - 07:10:43 PM
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.

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Def &mdash 02/19/06 - 07:10:48 PM
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.

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Def &mdash 02/19/06 - 07:10:51 PM
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.

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Def &mdash 02/19/06 - 07:10:51 PM
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.

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Def &mdash 02/19/06 - 07:10:51 PM
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.

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Def &mdash 02/19/06 - 07:10:52 PM
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.

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Super &mdash 02/20/06 - 03:22:32 PM
I really like the idea and the awesome bass loop. It can use a little more
instruments, maybe the scratchin guy who says "Bring The Beat Back!".
I dunno, but nice job! I really look forward to your other songs.

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Thanks Dudes!!! &mdash 02/23/06 - 11:36:53 AM
Cheers ppl... ill b updatin this wen my goddamn exams finish... ill take all that 2
mind. Thanks a bunch, and keep on da good work!

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Yes man &mdash 04/03/06 - 10:22:56 AM
Like'enit
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Respectfully
-----
Skean

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Yes man &mdash 04/03/06 - 10:22:57 AM
Like'enit
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Respectfully
-----
Skean

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Yes man &mdash 04/03/06 - 10:22:57 AM
Like'enit
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Respectfully
-----
Skean

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Word &mdash 04/14/06 - 05:47:19 PM
I really like it, but I like the Egyptian Chrome Riddim a little bit better.
Maybe if you re-did the vocals over that one. Whatever you do, it'll be
pretty pretty awesome, if you ask me.

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