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Egyptian Riddim

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karkhaz

 Genre: Hip Hop-Rap

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This is work in progress... a beat that i am makin with a couple of friends. @ da moment it is only me rappin in it (the higher pitched voice is my voice, but up an octave).
The chorous is still not recorded yet, and i need 2 put in the last verse... tell me what u think!
Kazzers
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Lyrics
Bring the beat back

- I see this girl
A real pretty girl
When her hips start to move
she likes to shake the whole world

All the mans used 2 stop
look and stare
she has a pretty little face
and a booty it was rare

But im tellin u son,
she aint the 1
even tho she got the beuaty
and a very nice bum

She will set ur heart arace
at an incredible pace
and leave u in the dust
with nuthin 2 chase

u got to get the girl
whos got the right mind
sum1 u can grow old with
and call 'mine'

i may not be experienced
or wise
but i know how 2 keep my eyes
on that prize

i meesed it all up
and now its all gone
and im sittin here wonderin
what i did wrong

1 minute in my life
i was just good cruisin
but now i can feel
that my heart is bruisin

Im finished
i cant c how shes out of my life
now i know
at the end of my tunnel
there is no light

...so bring the beat back

[chorus]
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Comments: 13
Fans: 1
Plays: 182
Downloads: 46
Votes: 4
Uploaded: Feb 19, 2006 - 03:01:56 PM
Last Updated: Feb 18, 2006 - 03:06:28 PM Last Played: Nov 09, 2009 - 09:49:57 PM
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Comments
Moses said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
i can feel it
there is something here, i think it could use a little something more
going on instrumentally, your voice is clipped in a few parts...but as
you say this is a work in progress i'll look forward to seeing the
updated version
Check out my latest song called Open Collab
lowkeyespree said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Def
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.
Check out my latest song called The Du (Genesis Of Armageddon Remix)
lowkeyespree said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Def
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.
Check out my latest song called The Du (Genesis Of Armageddon Remix)
lowkeyespree said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Def
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.
Check out my latest song called The Du (Genesis Of Armageddon Remix)
lowkeyespree said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Def
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.
Check out my latest song called The Du (Genesis Of Armageddon Remix)
lowkeyespree said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Def
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.
Check out my latest song called The Du (Genesis Of Armageddon Remix)
lowkeyespree said 1372 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Def
Accurately portrays some of the tribulations of single men, which is def
on all levels. I'd say more than anything, go back and work on the vocal
recording process. Record the verses in stanza's rather than all at once,
and you'll have a much more solid sounding track. Keep it up.
Check out my latest song called The Du (Genesis Of Armageddon Remix)
dapickle said 1371 days ago (February 20th, 2006)
Super
I really like the idea and the awesome bass loop. It can use a little more
instruments, maybe the scratchin guy who says "Bring The Beat Back!".
I dunno, but nice job! I really look forward to your other songs.
Check out my latest song called Same As Today
karkhaz said 1369 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
Thanks Dudes!!!
Cheers ppl... ill b updatin this wen my goddamn exams finish... ill take all that 2
mind. Thanks a bunch, and keep on da good work!
Check out my latest song called MAKE THAT MONEY!
said 1330 days ago (April 3rd, 2006)
Yes man
Like'enit
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Respectfully
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Skean
said 1330 days ago (April 3rd, 2006)
Yes man
Like'enit
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Respectfully
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Skean
said 1330 days ago (April 3rd, 2006)
Yes man
Like'enit
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Respectfully
-----
Skean
ultravphunter said 1318 days ago (April 14th, 2006)
Word
I really like it, but I like the Egyptian Chrome Riddim a little bit better.
Maybe if you re-did the vocals over that one. Whatever you do, it'll be
pretty pretty awesome, if you ask me.
Check out my latest song called Aura
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