You have some great ideas in here musically. It's a good song at heart
and in concept but the execution is really sloppy, particularly in tempo.
All the instruments sound all over the place on the timing. The mix could
be a lot better too; just not filling the space. But, again, the ideas are
really cool. I like the melody and how the parts are arranged. Has a kind
of retro 60's sound to it with that reverb. I'd mostly like to hear this
tightened up timing-wise so that the groove you're going for would truly
form and pull me in. It has potential to be a lot better.
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phrasings. Would have liked the drums a little more forward in the mix,
but that's just me. Overall, this one gets three thumbs up (Hey, I'm a
mutant!).
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