Parachute

Moses

Genre: Acoustic Rock

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lemme know what you think, anything at all

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My world is tumbling
Tumbling down around me
My world is crumbling
crumbling to the ground

No matter how hard
How hard I try
My world is nothing
Nothing without you

You disappear (from my memory)
You fade away

Let it fall down
Fall down
Like a parachute
Just fall down
fall down
Like a parachute

Let my world crash down
With my spirit gone
We all will go
But I didn't want this way

I am told in time
I will join her above
I can't continue on
Without my love

And I know
I know you're watching me
Can you tell?
That I'm am unhappy
I don't know
If I will ever let you go
You left too soon

Song Stats

Hits: 1854
Comments: 17
Fans: 1
Plays: 179
Downloads: 92
Votes: 8
Uploaded: Feb 21, 2006 - 02:57:36 PM
Last Updated: Mar 02, 2006 - 11:31:04 AM Last Played: Mar 07, 2013 - 10:16:54 AM

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screamalexz	screamalexz said 2675 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
	peaceful i like this, the piano is nice, i think the vocals sort of droan on a little like slurring or something. maybe articulate a little more. like the use of backing vocals. Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit

Moses	Moses said 2675 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
	peaceful roger, i plan on redoing the vocals, in fact, right after i submitted i was thinking to myself that i should redo them before i submit, but i was in a hurry, thanks for commenting --- --Arf woof-- Check out my latest song called I'm Gonna Leave This Home

screamalexz	screamalexz said 2675 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
	peaceful hehe that happens to me alot. --- Robert Smith lied, boys do cry Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit

	said 2675 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
	powerful supplication Reaching out with this one. Beautiful harmonies. Wonderful vocal contouring and breathy exudations. You're singing just a bit flat in places. The light piano part needs more variation and broadening...it gets too loopy sounding (ostinato). I go away from this piece satisfied.

Moses	Moses said 2675 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
	powerful supplication thanks mr. schletty, im going to go back and clean this one up a bit, i think it needs it, i will mess around with the piano, appreciate the comment! --- --Arf woof-- Check out my latest song called I'm Gonna Leave This Home

	said 2675 days ago (February 22nd, 2006)
	man... this is one moody piece of work. But we've probably all been to this place at one time or another. The lead vocal is really good. But you should hone the harmonies a bit. The song deserves to be more or less brought to perfection.

Moses	Moses said 2675 days ago (February 22nd, 2006)
	man... yes...i am going to spend some time on it, i think i had a little to much reverb in spots, glad you enjoyed it! er, in a moody way :) --- --Arf woof-- Check out my latest song called I'm Gonna Leave This Home

jiguma

jiguma said 2674 days ago (February 22nd, 2006)

lots of potential
This sounds to me like some northern English bands of the mid 70s -
especially the harmonies and the use of strings. I think this song has
lots of potential - I'd be looking at having another crack at the lead vox
though. This is definitely worth spending some time and energy on. I
totally understand being "in a hurry" to upload - I do it all the time.
The drum track suits the song well - is it loops or midi (or do you have
a drummer)? That doubled bass drum hit gets a bit annoying towards
the end - it's fine used subtly, but not every bar. The bass sounds a
bit like an afterthought in places, and could probably be a bit more
dynamic - is it midi or a real bass?
Overall, impressive!
Neil

Check out my latest song called INTO THE BLUE

Moses	Moses said 2674 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
	lots of potential i did everything on this track with midi, except the vocals of course! appreciate the comment! --- --Arf woof-- Check out my latest song called I'm Gonna Leave This Home

mandimonkee	mandimonkee said 2674 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
	wooof I like this alot. I love the piano and your voice sounds so moody. can't wait for the beastiality! Check out my latest song called Regression (collab w/Moses)

Moses	Moses said 2674 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
	wooof haha that just sounds soo wrong...thanks! --- --Arf woof-- Check out my latest song called I'm Gonna Leave This Home

Moses	Moses said 2674 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
	wooof haha that just sounds soo wrong...thanks! --- --Arf woof-- Check out my latest song called I'm Gonna Leave This Home

flattstanley	flattstanley said 2667 days ago (March 2nd, 2006)
	did the chute open? I love the piano part. Simple and elegant. The melody is nice but the backing vocals are a little much. Keep up the good work. -flattstanley Check out my latest song called Living It Up In The Underground

flattstanley	flattstanley said 2667 days ago (March 2nd, 2006)
	did the chute open? I love the piano part. Simple and elegant. The melody is nice but the backing vocals are a little much. Keep up the good work. -flattstanley Check out my latest song called Living It Up In The Underground

selters	selters said 2666 days ago (March 3rd, 2006)
	Great voice! I like that hypnotic Piano you are playing! And you sure have a great voice mister Moses! The drums sound good as well, and the strings add a nice little touch without being to overwhelming! Great song! Check out my latest song called So Far (Out Of Reach)

sometimesthree	sometimesthree said 2666 days ago (March 3rd, 2006)
	Nice Nice verse, love the chrous. Very dynamic transition. Looks like you plan to rerecord the vocals, good idea. Not that they're bad, but I'll bet you could improve them. Check out my latest song called Already Home

Moses	Moses said 2666 days ago (March 3rd, 2006)
	Nice yup, i recently took much of the reverb off the backup vocals, and this made the quality much better in certain parts of the song, but i do plan to redo the vocals, i can do better, thanks for the comments everyone! i'm glad you enjoyed the piece --- I'm not God, but... Check out my latest song called I'm Gonna Leave This Home

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Location: Tennessee United States

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