Very well done.

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This is really sweet sounding. Great warm melody arranged really well.
The fast light pattern over the cruising is a nice touch. I love the
harmonies. Your James Taylor-like singing sounds perfect for this, just
the right instrument. I enjoyed this a lot.

Only nit: What's that sound at the begining? It sounds like the clipped off
ending to something else before this song. You really should clean that
up because other than that this sounds pretty flawless and radio ready.

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lacking his interesting variations.

This is a very pleasant little song. Please understand that I offer the
following as constructive suggestions, not as criticism...

Recognizing this is a Demo, it sounds very good. I.G.M.'s excellent
vocals certainly DO give this tune a warm J.T. feel. Part of the problem
--- as *I hear it* --- is that ALL of the instrumental elements are
loaded into the arrangement from the get-go.

Staggering the introductions of the string pad and the arpeggio would
help *build* the arrangement a bit. Still, the tune is basically Verse &
Chorus X3 and out. I think it would benefit from an instrumental bridge
or interlude after the second chorus. The occasional horn stab I hear in
this current arrangement suggests a very pretty sax solo would work
quite nicely --- and perhaps allow for a little variation leading to the
final verse.

I would also suggest that the pretty harmony work in the choruses
could be enhanced by some additional instrumental help... perhaps a
more intricate bass line --- or a sax follow part. Perhaps even both. ;-)

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What a fabulous voice!
even as a demo, this really is a stunning track.
Wonderful songwriting Kr, , nicce arrangement and production.
D/L

Slimmie

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You ought to give this to James Tayor.

It would be perfect for him. Not that it is not perfect for you but he really
should like something like this gem.

Way to go!

Like the fast effects here.

This is terrific!

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I hate it when I spell things wrong like James Taylor!

But again, really I wish you could get this to James Taylor.

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Great sound. Nice vocals. Just a nice mellow melody works really well. Background vocals sound great.

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ditto slimgirl, a stunning track. great collab both of you. the JT
comparison is eirie. igm, your voice is truly soothing. nice job all the
way around. agree that it could use an instrumental bridge or possible
a horn solo. Thanks respectfully

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I'm a big fan of James Taylor and that is what it sounds like to me. Maybe even a bit of Vertical Horizon... you got to listen to them!

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Would have believed this was JT if I hadn't been told - I need to take
that out of the equation - right down to those immaculate harmonies.
I'd have liked some acoustic guitar in this - both picked and a lead -
but it really is excellent as it is, although some light and shade in
instrumentation would be good.
Very well done!
Neil

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...this is warm. A really lush and full sound to it.
The vocals are great! Excellent harmonizing and pretty much every single
note is spot on!
A very sweet track!
A fav and a DL, for sure!

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I love the undergiring pulsing energy holding up this piece... And the
song & songcraft is superb... you've captured the unexplainable here

I'm going to listen to more of your stuff

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I love the undergiring pulsing energy holding up this piece... And the
song & songcraft is superb... you've captured the unexplainable here

I'm going to listen to more of your stuff

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I wouldn't give a comment about how you produced this song, as I'm no musician at all - but I liked it a lot, and your other songs as well.

turritelle

PS: Greetings from Sterkrade. We went to the same class in primary school.

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