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Letter from under my bed


by

Hea

 Genre: Acoustic

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Recorded with a little help from my brother Warren.

And alright, I´ll do a remix. ;)
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Lyrics
So I´m lying here alone
by my own
here again
once again
on my own
here I am
-see me

there´s nothing you can do about it
nothing you can say
to make me stay
I won´t leave everything
everyting won´t leave me
goodbye goodbye

Do you hesitate?
Here again
once again
you don´t call me
like you used to

I won´t kill myself
so why do you keep
pushing me to tell?
I just wanna be alone

there´s nothing you can do about it
nothing you can say
to make me stay
I won´t leave everything
everyting won´t leave me
goodbye goodbye

there´s nothing you can do about it
nothing you can say
to make me stay
I won´t kill myself
that´s not what this is about
just leave me alone
leave me alone
leave me alone
for a while

there´s nothing you can do about it
nothing you can say
to make me stay
goodbye goodbye
Song Stats
Hits: 1734
Comments: 17
Fans: 6
Plays: 785
Downloads: 97
Votes: 14
Uploaded: Feb 23, 2006 - 04:12:13 AM
Last Updated: Feb 25, 2006 - 03:54:05 AM Last Played: Nov 22, 2009 - 12:55:01 AM
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Hardware:
Mac G4
Software:
Garageband
Comments
echoroom said 1372 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
song wins over mix
Firstly, I really love your voice - it's sweet and quite unique, and you sing this song beautifully.
This is a good song, and I like the way you use quite sparse instrumentation at various points, but I'd give it another go mixing this - the voice needs to be a bit sharper and maybe louder, and the piano and chorusy guitar are a little too loud.

But i'll definately be checking out some more of your stuff
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thoddi said 1372 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
good voice
You have a wonderful voice. I like this song, and its nice when that counter melody that the piano/strings play enters. I think the chosen instrumentation and the arrangement is well suited for the mood and flow of this song. But I could also visualize it in a arrangement with a groove from a bass and drums, where the piano theme more used as a hook-line.

Anyway, you have a new fan:)


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Corporal Beef said 1371 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
Comments
You have a really nice voice and I like the song. If I was producing, I would compress your vocal a bit, and ditch all the instruments other than the guitar. Then, i would write some lush chords that would lay underneath the guitar. Thanks so much for posting this!
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hammhock said 1371 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
Hea the songsmith
Very nice songwriting. The sparcity is quite nice, though you
might want to find a pianist to give you some help. The *idea* of
the song definately comes across, but the limitations
instrumentally are apparent. You've got a lovely voice in the vein
of Lisa Loeb and you know how to capitalize on it. Overall very
nice start. You're singer/songwriter career has a bright future.
Check out my latest song called Fall Away with Me - Acoustic/Piano
moorlandt said 1371 days ago (February 24th, 2006)
this voice deserves better
A very convincing voice, but in my opinion unfortunately a rather sloppy mix of instruments. When I first heard the guitar chords, I thouhgt the vocals were gonna sound similar. Then I was positively surprised to hear a quite crispy recording. If I were you, I would work on the quality of the instrumental recordings as well as on the balance of the mix.

Walter
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aclarke said 1370 days ago (February 25th, 2006)
So much good
Really nice melody with a very catchy chorus. I think all the components
are here for an excellent song. To me the instruments were on the loud
side... the piano was distracting being so high in the mix. The guitar was
well played but in the remix I would try making it sound softer and
warmer... if you know what I mean.

There is so much that is nice about this song that it would really be worth
the time and effort of remixing. There are several people here that I'm
certain would be glad to help you- if needed.

Beautiful song. And you have an excellent voice!
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selters said 1364 days ago (March 3rd, 2006)
a great song!
This is really a great song and you have a wonderful voice! The production needs some work though... But it doesnt detract from the great performance you lay down! Wow, that is one beautiful voice!
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virtualruffy said 1360 days ago (March 7th, 2006)
very nice
Enjoyable. Would like to see the remix fixing the technical areas. There are some areas your voice is too faint and gets overridden by the instruments, turning that up a notch would be great. Also the instrument that comes in at 'Do you hesitate..' is really loud and grating. Turning that down significantly would be my advice. I thought at first it was my desk phones loudspeaker system being activated.

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falo said 1356 days ago (March 11th, 2006)
great
great voice and good writing....thought the acoustic could be a bit
brighter but at the same time it fits the mood of the song....keep up the
good work....am going to listen to more
mvh9591 said 1355 days ago (March 12th, 2006)
I like it
Nice work- Keep it up
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HGB said 1349 days ago (March 18th, 2006)
Like the openess and live feel....
to your song, very nice vocals, sensual voice, warming effect, not to mention what a fine looking woman you are, good rythm and feel, production could be a little cleaner, but we have that problem sometimes as well. -HGB
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jie said 1336 days ago (March 31st, 2006)
cool
beautiful voice nice song good arrangment. enjoyed very much thank you. cheery
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selters said 1328 days ago (April 7th, 2006)
Voice!|
There is something about your voice that makes me freeze.... ...You are one hell of a songwriter...... :)
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Rolo said 1324 days ago (April 12th, 2006)
Beautiful
Great voice. Beautiful song. I simply find the piano a little loud in the mix,
but you got a new fan for sure.
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jackstone said 1306 days ago (April 30th, 2006)
All your works
is amazing! You have special talent for song writting.
Wish you debut and buy your cd in japan!
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ginz111 said 1292 days ago (May 14th, 2006)
Wow
You have a great voice! I'd love to work with you
Carl
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craft said 1066 days ago (December 26th, 2006)
Your voice is lovely
sweet and melodic... The song is really good but needs a better production... Keep it up
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