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| screamalexz said 1358 days ago (March 5th, 2006) | |
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expand i personally think the 2nd stanza would make a good chorus. a good demo, this can be a great song. i think it could be expanded on a bit more. like stated your voice is good. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| alley-oop said 1356 days ago (March 7th, 2006) | |
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sweet cool concept, great words. clever composition Check out my latest song called anymore
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| Scott Carmichael said 1342 days ago (March 21st, 2006) | |
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her majestys a pretty nice girl but she doesn't have a lot to say again your have much to say, with such economy.... you leave some mystery to, I like... still listening... I would like to hear this produced more seriously... what are you using to record (mikes? prreamps?ect.) thanx Check out my latest song called Good Morning
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| TobinMueller said 1232 days ago (July 9th, 2006) | |
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Tom Stoppard is my favorite playwright Tom Stoppard's "The Real Thing" is one of the greatest plays ever written. I can see why you chose it for your wonderful unadorned apropos song art. How many actresses do I know that this fits? The movement of the chords against the strong melody is wonderful, and I love the rise and fall of the lyrical lines (I am a huge fan of your sound), but I thought a dissonance at the lyric "day became" didn't work, in my ears. There is something not enough about this small jewel, since it deals with a category of normal stereotyping. It needs a special detail to make it the level of crystalline art that most of your other tracks achieve, I think. But precious, nonetheless. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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cjorgensen
great singing, nice lyrics, great emotion and subject.
I want more stanzas and maybe turn the third verse into a chorus.
Production is raw, but you know that.