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jonx

 Genre: Alternative Rock

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another acoustic demo
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we're talking on the phone:
we speak in civil tones...
about this lonely, only life...

you hate to sleep alone,
so you take off your clothes/for anyone
'til that's what you become

with each and every line
that you memorize
'til every play, every day became

you're lonely, only life...
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Uploaded: Mar 04, 2006 - 09:06:16 PM
Last Updated: Mar 04, 2006 - 06:13:30 PM Last Played: Oct 09, 2009 - 07:14:02 AM
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cjorgensen said 1358 days ago (March 5th, 2006)
wow
great singing, nice lyrics, great emotion and subject.

I want more stanzas and maybe turn the third verse into a chorus.

Production is raw, but you know that.
Check out my latest song called Gardens
screamalexz said 1358 days ago (March 5th, 2006)
expand
i personally think the 2nd stanza would make a good chorus. a good demo, this can be a great song. i think it could be expanded on a bit more. like stated your voice is good.
Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
alley-oop said 1356 days ago (March 7th, 2006)
sweet
cool concept, great words. clever composition
Check out my latest song called anymore
Scott Carmichael said 1342 days ago (March 21st, 2006)
her majestys a pretty nice girl
but she doesn't have a lot to say

again your have much to say, with such economy.... you leave some
mystery to, I like... still listening... I would like to hear this produced
more seriously... what are you using to record (mikes? prreamps?ect.)

thanx
Check out my latest song called Good Morning
TobinMueller said 1232 days ago (July 9th, 2006)
Tom Stoppard is my favorite playwright
Tom Stoppard's "The Real Thing" is one of the greatest plays ever written.
I can see why you chose it for your wonderful unadorned apropos song
art. How many actresses do I know that this fits? The movement of the
chords against the strong melody is wonderful, and I love the rise and fall
of the lyrical lines (I am a huge fan of your sound), but I thought a
dissonance at the lyric "day became" didn't work, in my ears. There is
something not enough about this small jewel, since it deals with a
category of normal stereotyping. It needs a special detail to make it the
level of crystalline art that most of your other tracks achieve, I think. But
precious, nonetheless.
Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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pretty much just driving around, reading, writing, downloading prince bootlegs, working out, making burritos. music, sleeping and finding the perfect club sandwich... ... [see more]

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The terms alternative rock and alternative music[1] were coined in the early 1980s to describe punk rock-inspired music genres which didn't fit into the mainstream genres of the time. At times it was used as catch-all phrase for rock music from under

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