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And Life flowed on.... by Cassie Smith [Email]

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Last Played: Aug 14, 2008 - 10:58:25 AM
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Uploaded: Mar 06, 2006 - 06:55:35 PM
Last Updated: Mar 06, 2006 - 06:33:05 PM
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Inspirational (83), floating (15)
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This is only my 5th song ive ever made oin garage band, but tell me what you think, iam a newb, is it good for a newb?
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Welcome to MacJams &mdash 03/06/06 - 07:19:15 PM
A bit short, but you have an interesting start with the loops you are using.
Develop it further, add a little variety, a few different changes. Consider
your songs "stories"... with a beginning, middle, a twist of plot, and an
ending. Before you know it, you'll be composing great works.

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MJ conquers the east coast! &mdash 03/06/06 - 08:12:24 PM
Nice start Cassie - welcome to MJ - looks like we just about have the
east coast covered now! As Alimar says, a bit short, but isn't it great to
hear what can be done with just a few loops! It's good for a newbie -
just keep em comiing.


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MJ conquers the east coast! &mdash 03/06/06 - 08:13:18 PM
btw - if you want good advice, listen to Alimar!

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Hello fellow newbie &mdash 03/06/06 - 08:29:28 PM
Well, I've been doing this for about a 2 months now. It certainly is fun, don't ya think?

There is an easy flowing spirit to your piece so far. it does seem like just the beginning of something. But the bottom does seem to disappear half way through and I kept on expecting it to return, or at least something else to take its place.

I found it also interesting that you chose to place this in the Inspirational category. Do you intend to have lyrics eventually?

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Off to a good start &mdash 03/18/06 - 09:13:23 AM
as is already mentioned length. This sounds like a real good verse line
and then for the chorus screaming guitars! Then right back to the
verse...has the makings of a very interesting altenrative tyoe piece.
Welcome and thanks for sharing!
Blessings,
Jim

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Nice short one &mdash 03/27/06 - 12:16:53 PM
nice feel. very relaxing. Not sure if I would call it inspirational, but I
guess it could be. Wish it was about 3 minutes longer though.

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Nice short one &mdash 03/27/06 - 12:16:55 PM
nice feel. very relaxing. Not sure if I would call it inspirational, but I
guess it could be. Wish it was about 3 minutes longer though.

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Good arrangement &mdash 05/08/06 - 12:38:22 AM
I am new also to this site, and your arrangement is good. I didn't realize
it didn't have vocals and the intro was so good that I was sad there were
none, which is a good thing. I think you should continue this into a
complete song for sure. If it is simple, keep it simple, maybe just a
melody that runs through the song in and out with different voices. Just
thoughts, it sounds good. Always have fun and God Bless.

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