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My Last Days


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This is the shit.
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Verse
one more beating ill do it again and
you wont regret me doing it
my life is so isolated
from the world

Chorus
pushed and shoved
I've had my fill
I no longer have the will to live forever

Verse
burning in my lonlyness wasting away
as the days go by feeling so
icalated crying in my sleep
waking up to
another day of disapointment.

Chorus
pushed and shoved
I've had my fill
I no longer have the will to live forever

As I lay with a tear in my eye, pain
and suffering are my tormenters
in my darkest hours

Chorus
pushed and shoved
I've had my fill
I no longer have the will to live forever

Chorus
pushed and shoved
I've had my fill
I no longer have the will to live forever
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Hits: 554
Comments: 4
Fans: 0
Plays: 94
Downloads: 18
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Mar 08, 2006 - 06:54:57 PM
Last Updated: Mar 08, 2006 - 06:51:32 PM Last Played: Jul 28, 2009 - 11:46:16 AM
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Hardware:
Washburn Electric guitar
Marshal Amp(30 watt)
Crate Electric guitar
Crate Amp
G2 Guitar pedal
Software:
Audacity
Comments
Corporal Beef said 1356 days ago (March 9th, 2006)
Uplifting...
Love the changes, but I'm not sure the over-saturation of your vocal works. Try distortion on your vocals; it will work wonders. Thanks for posting.
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FSVC said 1277 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
Erm...
The guitar playing was good, but the changes didn't fit together very well. It was as if you'd started playing another song. The guitar solo was long and got very boring, especially since there was nothing else behind it, just silence and the one guitar. Face it, you are not a good singer, you have the death metal screaming down, but you can't hold a tune. I couldn't even tell if there WAS a tune in that song. Sorry, but you should just stick to playing guitar.
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screamalexz said 1276 days ago (May 28th, 2006)
Erm...
not sure i'd encourage him to stop, just encourage him to get lessons or to atleast work more on the vocals. if he's at all like me being told to quit music or just play guitar won't stop him.

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screamalexz said 1276 days ago (May 28th, 2006)
keep it up
guitar seems fine. vocals could use some work. have you tried practicing with a tuner to know you're singing the right note? worked wonders for me. just got to practice constantly. atleast an hour a day i'd sugjest. the vocals are a little bit too infront as already stated. i'd sugjest if possible getting some to add live drums for you. you're doing better then i was at your age tho. keep it up.
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Heavy metal, sometimes referred to as simply metal, is a form of music characterised by aggressive, driving rhythms and highly amplified distorted guitars. Heavy metal is a development of blues, blues rock, rock and prog rock. Its origins lie in the

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