Thanks for sharing this. Great song. The overall structure is solid. Nice sound.

I did have trouble making out the lyrics. The voice definitely could be brought forward. And share the lyrics if you are so inclined. I think lyrics get short changed on this site and I am on a mission to highlight them.

Really nice job.

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I dig your voice, you articulations, the way you make the lyrics come to
life in a subtle and real way. Your use of guitar has driving energy that
creates nice pacing and spacial effects. And I like the bass edge you
achieve. The depth of the guitar chords in the chorus almost bury your
vocals and perhaps needs more compression. (I really like to follow
along with lyrics, if you could add them, I'd appreciate it. Especially the
part about Suzy Snake.) And the beginning of the bridge "Just a little
bug..." could use a guitar solo or something, in my ears, to bring the
listener down a bit, settling into the vocals, and maybe a touch more
reverb on the backing vocals. I dig the imagery and use of well
balanced phrases. I agree that bringing the vocals forward would help
the track, since its lyrics want to be heard. The level of "Cannot seem
to find the words" section is just right in my ears, the vocals should
float over the bed by that much throughout. But very nice track.

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This is your best song. Love the mood, the composition, the production quality - all top stuff.

Looking forward to listening to your next track! Heard it's a belter.

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