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Mellow groove...
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You have this way of casting your spell over me
And I flutter helplessly
You have this way of driving your nail into me
And I mutter thankfully
I'll drift away on the waves
I'm feeling better every day
I took your hand and forgave
I know we're gonna be OK
You have this way of tripping me up with your smile
And I stumble gracefully
You have this way of sticking your knife in my back
And I cry out silently
You have this way of wrapping your legs around me
And I melt into a dream
You have this way of twisting my name into a scream
And I sit up faithfully
And I flutter helplessly
You have this way of driving your nail into me
And I mutter thankfully
I'll drift away on the waves
I'm feeling better every day
I took your hand and forgave
I know we're gonna be OK
You have this way of tripping me up with your smile
And I stumble gracefully
You have this way of sticking your knife in my back
And I cry out silently
You have this way of wrapping your legs around me
And I melt into a dream
You have this way of twisting my name into a scream
And I sit up faithfully
MissChaos
I came here after reading your comment on my song, and I'm really
glad I did! This is really nice. Reminds me a bunch of one of my
favorite alt rockers here at MacJams. I love your guitar solo work at the
end. There are some really cleverly placed notes in there that were
really unexpected and fun! (what is the guitar terminology for plucking
a note in two octaves?)... anyhow, whatever it is, it's done really, really
well. I'm pleased to hear the vocals here uneffected; without tons of
reverb. I think for this tune, it gives it a much more intimate feeling.
I'm not good at vocal EQing, but I think this could benefit from some
stereo separation on the melody & harmony tracks. If you ever decide
to re-work this, I'd be curious to hear what it would sound like with
more empasis on the percussion. Not sure if it would give a different
feeling altogether, but it could very well heighten the drama of this.
there are some really good vocal and mastering "pros" here on
MacJams if you ever want to pick some brains on that subject. Really
nice work! Will be on the lookout for more from you! --MissChaos