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Description
A melodic acoustic song that came together in a very short, yet inspired period on a sunny field. My good friend Josh is playing some chords that came together as instantly as the lyrics did.
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Lyrics
[Chorus]
Come be close to me, 'cause I would like to show you
The perfection that I've seen, and made a part of me
Within this hurricane of time
Your energy's so deep it's like my own
I'll miss you when you're gone
Moonlight falling through an open
Window in my bedroom on the floor
I think I saw your silhouhette inside
A shadow painted on the door
White light that blankets me and guides me
To a dream where I see you
Dark trees and shades of green offsetting
Thoughts of you scarred in maroon
(Scarred in maroon)
[Chorus]
I'm walkin' in a garden made of
My imagination in my head
Beneath these dreams of fireflies and
Images in skies composed of red
Well ashes fall on faded leaves of
Maples trees that line the path I'm on
And I could ask directions but I'm
Happy just to wander on my own
(On my own)
(Bridge)
I'm starin' out my window and I'm wishin' you were here
And I can hear the beating of your heart inside my ear
Your breathing matches mine as we become the inbetween
And manifest the beauty of the images we've seen
And I get lost inside of you but you're inside of me
As we become the music and the rhythm of the beat
It's so beautiful, unbelievable, but I believe it though
Your love cannot be captured
Come be close to me, 'cause I would like to show you
The perfection that I've seen, and made a part of me
Within this hurricane of time
Your energy's so deep it's like my own
I'll miss you when you're gone
Moonlight falling through an open
Window in my bedroom on the floor
I think I saw your silhouhette inside
A shadow painted on the door
White light that blankets me and guides me
To a dream where I see you
Dark trees and shades of green offsetting
Thoughts of you scarred in maroon
(Scarred in maroon)
[Chorus]
I'm walkin' in a garden made of
My imagination in my head
Beneath these dreams of fireflies and
Images in skies composed of red
Well ashes fall on faded leaves of
Maples trees that line the path I'm on
And I could ask directions but I'm
Happy just to wander on my own
(On my own)
(Bridge)
I'm starin' out my window and I'm wishin' you were here
And I can hear the beating of your heart inside my ear
Your breathing matches mine as we become the inbetween
And manifest the beauty of the images we've seen
And I get lost inside of you but you're inside of me
As we become the music and the rhythm of the beat
It's so beautiful, unbelievable, but I believe it though
Your love cannot be captured
I like the basic tracks you have here. The vocals are solid, but I feel
there should be a little more reverb on the vox. A drum beat is
beckoning. I hear so much more going on... the addition of strings is a
nice touch. My suggestion is to use a pop screen, and watch the "P"s in
your vocals. Consider expanding upon the composition, it deserves a
little more attention.
Also, change the genre... it has 'Alternative" written all over it.