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This is a revised version. I took into account the feedback I received and made a few adjustments to what some people thought was an "annoying" shimmery guitar effect. I panned some stuff and put in a brand new vocal track. If anyone out there has listened to it before, please give it another try and let me know if this is an improvement.
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Lyrics
Hot summer sun loves cold winter moon
Flashes her eye and sings him a tune
A tune about love and pink summer skies
And diamonds that melt in her eyes
(Chorus)
What kind of world would it be
If day became night
How would we get any sleep
If dark became light
If the sun and the moon
and the moon and the sun
The sun and the moon
and the moon and the sun
Became one
Moon takes her hand
And twirls her about
Then pulls her close
And leaves her no doubt
That moon has a sweet
And warm beating heart
And now they will never ever part
(chorus)
Flashes her eye and sings him a tune
A tune about love and pink summer skies
And diamonds that melt in her eyes
(Chorus)
What kind of world would it be
If day became night
How would we get any sleep
If dark became light
If the sun and the moon
and the moon and the sun
The sun and the moon
and the moon and the sun
Became one
Moon takes her hand
And twirls her about
Then pulls her close
And leaves her no doubt
That moon has a sweet
And warm beating heart
And now they will never ever part
(chorus)
drakonis
I like this better. I like your harmonies and voice. I like the alternating/
bouncing "Became one" between main and harmony vox, very cute. Nice
guitar playing too. There's some background hiss on the vocal track,
which just cuts off at the end, but that's hard to get rid of without good
mics and preamps... but you may want to slowly ramp down the
Garageband audio level on that track right after your last words (or turn
on some "Gate") to get rid of the hiss at the end. Cool bouncy song, nice
improvements.
ttfn,
Drakonis