Hi!

Great songwriting. I liked it pretty much. Just one thing to mention: I
would have preferred some variation to the drums. But that's not all too
important.

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Hi Tobbe, and welcome to MacJams!

Feel that this tune has a good swing and a good mood! I dig the
intertwining guitars and the popsy backup. Also think you are a good
singer.

/Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander

PS. Helt kul o hitta en till svensk pa macjams! Det kryllar inte av oss...



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Oh yes, the constructive critics:

Not much, just that I feel some instruments should be panned a bit
towards the center and not so extreme out. When listening in
headphones, especially the guitar in the left ear almost feels like some
mosquito that doesn't belong to the music.

Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander


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I agre with Curry but a prety nice start.
Welcome/Välkommen

Sincerely
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Skean

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Hallå där!
Jag jobbar på de sakerna du tog upp. Ska snart lägga upp en ny version.

/Tobbe

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Haha! Skysst med lite svenska kommentarer !!!

Good to hear!

Wish you the best fortune here! This is a great place!

Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander


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/Johannes "Curry" Cori Ander

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nice guitar intro, excellent voice, great arrangement. lovely. keep it up. Cheery

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Thanks a lot for all kind words! I hope I´ll upload the fianl version of this song tomorrow (monday).


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A very good pop song sense here... you understand how to put it all
together, mix sonuds good on my speakers... the vocorder on the bak
vox was a nice touch... not overdone... this is a great start... you
obviously have the background

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Nice song and a good vox mix...Its probably my speaker but i want some
more "body" or bas, but ovarall a god song well "sunged" (s�ger man s�?)

;-) welcome to MJ

Thompa

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Thanks! I´ll try to upload some more songs during the next week.

/Tobbe

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Really strong writing, solid tune. Nice use of harmonies, sustaining
chordal notes, giving the track a shining, crystalline feel. Great pacing,
beat, hopeful feel. When it comes to the mix, in my headphones the
extreme panning of the lead guitar (left) was a distraction; and the
repetitive nature of the harpsichord sounding ostinato guitar part needed
a more natural acoustic sound, something more alive, to match the really
nice electric guitar and smooth bass work. But I really enjoyed this song,
the solid writing, the wonderful singing, the smiling feel behind it all.

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.. nice harmonies, vocal recording, effect selection.

I agree the panning choices for the instruments is the
thing that strikes me as the only thing 'odd' in the mix .. (el.guitar and
bass guitar off to the left is the most noticeable).

Tune is well delivered but plods along a bit too much and needs more
passion and sparkle - more dynamic drums may lift it a notch as
suggested above. Bit 'harmless' for my tastes but good work all the
same.

I imagined Belinda Carlisle or the Bangles singing this .. hmm, no idea
why.

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