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| said 1297 days ago (May 5th, 2006) | |
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nice friend! Oh BTW...10-10-9-10 FOr what it's worth. This song moved me, and I have to feedback to give. I like it as is. This is itunes ready. |
| Sil-VER said 1298 days ago (May 3rd, 2006) | |
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Bellissimo!!! Thanks atonails... Silver Check out my latest song called Falling (W/I. Spike)
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| Mcboy said 1298 days ago (May 3rd, 2006) | |
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very very hip......! Check out my latest song called Heros( aclarke/mcboy)
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| Nurse DRE said 1298 days ago (May 3rd, 2006) | |
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captivating brandon (EE) sent me the link to this song and I was instantly captivated - the harmony and emotion are musical lures that trapped me good ... you certainly know what you're doing - cheers! |
| drakonis said 1298 days ago (May 3rd, 2006) | |
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darkly sweet great underlying music bed (really liked the bent-down bass, wish it were more bassy and predominant though).. inventive effects with the voice, quite effective, draws me in... and sheesh, great singing too. I feel a lot of thought and work went into this, quite polished. ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
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| perceptualvortex said 1298 days ago (May 3rd, 2006) | |
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Very nice. I especially like the vocals. Awesome production as usual. Check out my latest song called Machine Man (w Beastie Boys)
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| The Composer said 1298 days ago (May 3rd, 2006) | |
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They're all right you know... You've got a wonderful ability to churn out well produced and interesting tracks pretty quickly, get yourself a regular singer and you'll have an album that I wouldn't second guess buying. As to the song, very cool... nice progressions, great singing and an awesome combination between glitched/unglitched sounds... more subtle than some of your previous stuff, but enough to keep it very interesting and so you. Things that didn't quite sit well with me... I felt as if either the song was a little too long... or you just didn't build it enough or fast enough so the energy of the piece got a little stagnant at times... not moving anywhere. The drums that kicked in at about halfway needed to be brought in at the end of the piano/percussion interlude 1/4-1/3 way through... this little lull was a perfect place to come back stronger than before, instead you kept the same energy and sounds as before which was a little disapointing. I'd also want another change up in energy towards the end, probably for the same reasons. Theres many dips and lulls in the piece which is pretty cool, but theres not much in the way to balance it out in the other end. One other point, at the beginning the analoge like drums are very nice and subtle and work well... however the drums in the second half, although they build the energy well, they are too straight for your style and sort of hold the piece back a little. They either need to be played a little more fluid... or glitched more like your other stuff. Anyway, really enjoyed this one, downloaded and faved and everything... well done. Check out my latest song called 25 Minutes in a Japanese Restaurant (Readers Digest Version) (MJRF)
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| TobinMueller said 1298 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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Audio captures concept Nice spacial spaces left and good use of effects. The harmonies in the chord progression, the open suspensions especially and orchestration, is nicely done. In my ears I thought the track could benefit from a more present bass line (the first time it comes in, about 2/3s thru, has the best moodiness and goth feel). Consider having a live bassist collaborate to complete a well done track. Reminds me a bit of POE, who I like. I had trouble following the words and would have liked lyrics posted, but I also think more details in the verses, specific things to make the poetry cut deeper, would strength the content. You captured the languor and separation inertia of hollow relationships in your audio choices; I like this sort of concept song. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| MissChaos said 1298 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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mysterious & nocturnal What a pro production. Crisp, spot-on frequencies. Compelling slow build that, even though doesn't have a distinct climax, ends and leaves me having to listen again just to experience that dreamy, dark & mysterious voice. The hang on that last vocal note is just gorgeous. When I listened for the third time, I paid more attention to the way this is constructed; it's not an overly thick layering of sounds, but the way you use effects and jarring cut-offs make this such a dramatic song. It's the simplicity of the music tracks that let her voice weave perfectly in and out of the space. Harmonically, there's nothing atonal about it. :-) Kudos to you, atonalis, and everyone else involved on this. Can I borrow your vocalist?! cheers. -- Miss Chaos Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| atonalis said 1298 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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mysterious & nocturnal so glad to get a visit from you! as i love your music.... i know our posts dont equal out in terms of relavance genre-wise..... your words are so apreciated. this was meant to be slow, meditative.... jarring in transition and subtle climax...... which to me, i strived for at the end....... thanks again for your visit ! ! ! ! Check out my latest song called lit with a wet match.
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| MissChaos said 1297 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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mysterious & nocturnal I don't care what you label it. If it moves me, I would listen again and again. This, my friend, is beautiful and moving. I had this on repeat for awhile this evening. I sometimes try to give a good technical critique, but when i can't see past the emotive values, all I can do is tell you how much it can impact one's state of mind. How can you quantify that?! Rhetorical question. That's a quality in music that can rise above how technically perfect a song can be, in my humble opinion. --- . . : : Meow : : . . Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| Stun Nutz said 1298 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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whooO! That was one top notch production, as usual... but this time, it was very "accessible!" I mean, I could almost imagine this being played on mainstream radio. It reminded me of (kill me later) Evanescence, but without the nu-metal leanings... and way more interesting. This could be a nice secrect weapon used to convert people and their musical mindsets. Side note: I love how you left her voice sounding clear (with no glitch) as she holds the note at the end. Nice restraint. Check out my latest song called Gossamer dissected
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| FEEL said 1298 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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Reality check Does have that reality check issue... I finally found myself listening to the music with my eyes closed. Nice ambiance, heavy on the effects but it works well with me. Especially the vocals... really blends with the composition as a whole. If I tried to do that with a vocal track I would end up loosing it in the mix. The melody on the other hand is just OUTSTANDING! I need this... John Check out my latest song called Pigs Fly
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| ktb said 1297 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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a really cool track track. I'm not sure what happened with my original comment, so I apologize in advance if this shows up twice. The backing tracks are as Professional as any I've heard here. The progression is inventive and great depth. DR's voice is astonishingly GOOD. I think you guys are a great collab pair. Also is DR a MJ artist, I did a quick search but came up empty. I enjoyed this immensely thx John Check out my latest song called off the deck (w/Z293)
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| musichead said 1297 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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total shock Very hot song,,,Im speechless... Steve Anderson Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| cjorgensen said 1297 days ago (May 4th, 2006) | |
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wonderful I thought some of the vocal bending was a bit much. I'd get into the lyrics or singing right when it goes, "crick crick crick," or somesuch. Reminds me tons of Delirium. This is like much of what I listen to. If I paid a buck to download this I wouldn't feel cheated. It's a nice song. I'm in love with the vocalist. Check out my latest song called Gardens
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| caroline said 1297 days ago (May 5th, 2006) | |
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i found this very disturbing but then the vocal came in and that caught my ear - where are the written lyrics? i really like to read this stuff while i listen - pfft - this is very clever - no wonder i go rushing back to my campfire! brilliant - just brilliant - i'm even going to vote!! thank you for sharing your talent Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf
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| Macaudion said 1297 days ago (May 5th, 2006) | |
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YOU! Man you have it DOWN, and on every tune that I've heard of what you've been kind enough to share w/ us here - It is absolutely w/o coincidence that you are hanging out up here and at the top of the board - The vocals and all of the backing instrumentation; everything... It's original and it is densely packed w/ a marvel of events that continues a groovn' signature sound that is undoubtedly, antonalis - You know that is is beyond ON, when you're in the middle of the newly, hip meat packing district of NYC and at some internet cafe and still, it does what it does; it transports you to a better place... Thanks for reminding me, Sir... - Always... Dion Check out my latest song called 123 iGetU
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| thetiler said 1296 days ago (May 5th, 2006) | |
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interesting stuff Thanks for sharin Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| Frog4 said 1296 days ago (May 6th, 2006) | |
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Powerful Newbie to site and if this is indicative of the quality, oh wow. Echoing some other posts, this singer has that special quality that makes you feel immersed in a mood. Mix and flow are masterful. Really hits stride when drums kick in latter part. This song (and artist) deserves good things... Check out my latest song called No World Order
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| illuminati said 1296 days ago (May 6th, 2006) | |
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The production here is pinnacle stuff The voice and the music complement each other extremely well. Intriguing songwriting, and interesting song. I was comfortable with the length of the song because you had plenty for the ear to look for. If I heard this on the radio, I very likely would be tracking it down at the local store (or itunes). Check out my latest song called Vainglorious
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| 13 said 1296 days ago (May 6th, 2006) | |
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this... really is fantastic. greatness all round and a perfect choice of vocalist. Check out my latest song called oceans and oceans
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| K.I.S.KISMET said 1295 days ago (May 7th, 2006) | |
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Knee-weakening Checked Distorted Reality...M's voice is terrific and the bands music is good. I personally like your style of music much better and think her voice could not fit more perfectly. Yes, it does remind me of Telefon Tele Viv as well. Always in admiration....SO hot! Check out my latest song called Your's
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| datafunk said 1294 days ago (May 8th, 2006) | |
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top I'm glad you finally have the audience you deserve ato. I won't be very talkative. this is simply perfect. bravo. Check out my latest song called Dr Lioli vs the seven blender army (feat Dr Lioli as himself)
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| SlimGirlFat said 1293 days ago (May 9th, 2006) | |
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Simply Beautifully produced. Wonderful vocals... and the music bed is wonderful.. Bravo.. Slimmie Check out my latest song called Not Enough
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| screamalexz said 1293 days ago (May 9th, 2006) | |
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lyrics? posting the lyrics would be nice, the skipping on the vocals is rather creative. pretty great production. nice enchanting feel with a hint of industrial/techno to it. a little before halfway there's a nice breat i like. i think you could easily get onto a pretty good label. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| Drew Kopr said 1293 days ago (May 9th, 2006) | |
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Wow What an amazing tune and production! can you give me the link to the original so I can listen to it and compare this verion? Great work! Drew. Check out my latest song called WinterSong
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| Bubowski said 1293 days ago (May 9th, 2006) | |
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Freakin Outrageous One of the best things I've heard here or elswhere! Damn you're good. (I don't even like glitchy stuff usually). All 10s from me for sure. Check out my latest song called Galaxy Band 8
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| Bubowski said 1293 days ago (May 9th, 2006) | |
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Which Strings are those? (As in, which library) So smooth and perfect with the electrincs, voice and glitches. Check out my latest song called Galaxy Band 8
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| Number-S said 1281 days ago (May 21st, 2006) | |
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1000 yard stare I went to the goth genre section because I thought that it might be good for a few laughs, then I was caught with a thousand yard stare when I heard this piece, it is awe striking & easy to get lost in. No. S Check out my latest song called Haven't Thought of That
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| mr.turtle said 1279 days ago (May 22nd, 2006) | |
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Remove the A in your handle One of your more accessible pieces. Finally reaching out to the unwashed masses. You've shown with this piece that one can be accessible and still be creative. Even though its riddled with techno it has an organic feeling to it. It is some of the best produced and most creative music that I%u2019ve heard here. Clearly you have dared to be great. Turtle Out. Check out my latest song called In the Air
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| icharus1969 said 1218 days ago (July 23rd, 2006) | |
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Freakin' Awsome! Beautiful Music, and your voice is absolutely haunting! This song is going to be listed as one of my first favs! Check out my latest song called Angry
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| j2morrow said 1143 days ago (October 5th, 2006) | |
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Wow Awesome song. Wish you'd posted the lyrics. And who's the singer? Great voice. Impressive work here, my friend. Can't believe this didn't come off a CD somewhere. Check out my latest song called CAPTURE THE RAPTURE
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So smooth and emotional.
Top notch production as expected.
You need to stop messing around Shawn and either
get on a good label, or just start your own. If you decide on the latter, let
me know and i'll join you.
EE