like the humming in the intro, beautiful voice, the instrumental is very beautiful and peaceful nicely put together. for such little lyrics, you have made them very powerful the few words there are strong, and the singing mixed with the instrumental turns this short poem into a great song.

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Thanks very much!

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Lovely. I know that that word is rather generic, but it really does descirbe how I feel about this piece.

Your singing is beautiful. The guitar work is solid. Nice adornment with the strings.

The song would be greatly elevated with new verses. Expand on the images of mist and the house on the hill. What else do you see in these settings? How else do you and your angel interact? Inquiring minds want to know.

Overall, nice job! Cheers.

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Hmmm ok, I will try to add another verse or two. Thanks!

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love your voice on this... your other post didn't really feature your
ability to emote... you can really sing well... but this feels unfinished to
me... it could be in the dynamic build or the lack of a bridge... you
seem to like to write small self contained ditties.. like "her majesty's a
pretty nice girl"... you should go visit Jonx... He's an MJer who
specializes in short pointed well written songs ...you'd like him

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Yeah... that guitar sounds great! Your voice is clear and you use just the right amount ov vibrato.

My front deck has a great view of the mountains on the Gaspe coast of Quebec just over the water. I'll have to play this tune as I sit out there tomorrow morning. It's the perfect soundtrack!

Mike T.

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.. rich voice here ... I also really liked the humming in the beginning .... it almost sounded like a female voice at first .... must mean you have one heck of a range !

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