This is your best one of all the tracks you've posted so far, I think. They're all rather good, but this one especially so. Keep up the good work.

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I dug the ending the best. Nice twist. Kind of like fading into the sunset
down the baked goods aisle at the grocery store. I always like surprises,
and this one was a nice touch.

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if i were u i wud take out the beginning instrument... apart from that its a
good beat and a good rap. keep it up.

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It's different. I haven't heard many people use that kind of back round for
a rap song. It works though. The lyrics turned out well too.

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