Great song you made there, i dig it..the lyrics sounds a bit like Pearl Jam i think..wich is great.

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and well crafted. I notice that the arragement makes the song pull back
from forward momentum towards the end of each verse. This is an
interesting effect leading me as a listener to anticipate more about what's
coming next.


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I like how more present your performance sounds, less reverb, more right
beside me; and I really like the addition of bass and electric rhythm
guitar; and the harmonies make the bridge really nice. The arrangement is
mainstream and very nicely done. However, altho the middle section has
great balance (ac gtr left, el gtr right), the opening and ending section
with just one guitar, especially the ac gtr at the end, seems out of balance
(in my ears). Also, in the instrumental section the flute-synth seems a
little soft and too right as well. Many more interesting details in this
version, nice work!

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like that marching beat, the instruments flow nicely as well.

Nice style!

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fellas.....a mainstream jonx.......say it ain't so man....hehhehhe....great
song and tune crafting...!

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Pleasant, well written, finely crafted song...

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Will you just explain to me how come you're not this amazing super-
famous star with a recording contract and several fancy cars and limos,
one of which you are gracious enought to lend to me?...

Or are you?

This is a very fine song and a lovely performance, and if you WERE or
ARE that super-famous guy, then you could produce this version of a
song like this, and it would sound just fine on radio and critics would
say it has a "charming immediacy" and make much of its supposed
small flaws...

As, perhaps, an alternative to your better known, more produced or
rock-oriented or alternative or AOR style...

Sheesh. While some of us ASPIRE to be so flawed...

This is really nice. And if you secretly ARE Eddie Vedder, or Matthew
Sweet, or something, forget about the car thing. Buy me a studio.
Small one.

Ed



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...of new ways to express my fondness of your work.
It just WORKS!
This is just gorgeous.
Oh, and kudos to kevmikwa, as well!

Yet another addition to my Jonx playlist...

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I like this. I was going to make comments like Ejh did, but EJH beat me to it. So instead I'll just say that my favourites are songs like this, Angel of Small Noises and Found - the intimate ones. You do them very effectively.

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