Cool tune. You've got some great sounds going in this thing. You know, I
think a lot of people ruin their songs with unnecessary panning, but your
subtle panning really works...the drums hypnotize you with the gentle
swaying left to right and back again. My only complaint is that it's too
short...you should expand on it and take it somewhere else as it
progresses...love it.

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Sounds pretty good. I had to take a second listen. Not bad my man.
Thanks for sharing.

mvh: )

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funny, woke up, got online, tapped into the chat and saw this link.

my typical morning flavor for music is Jazz. a little Miles, a little
Mingus... but this is what i was led to.

i cannot critique the song based on structure or instrumentation,
because i don't know enough about jazz to be dangerous. i can only
comment based on subjective emotional response.

my first thought is, it's way too short. boy, this one just got going for
me and it ended. seriously, this could've gone on for another ten
minutes and i'd have been just fine with it!

second, it's a terrific tune to dig into early on a Sunday morning. a bit
sporatic, with some wonderful bits of movement and jingling effects
going on. the overall vibe is both cool and off-center (in being that it's
not exactly positive and upbeat, but not exactly negative and downbeat
either).

this is a perfect tune for making breakfast. the slightly frantic rush of
timing the eggs with the toast... hehe!

but more seriously, you've got a great feel for this style of music. i'm
looking forward to more! but please, in the future, consider doubling
the time of this one. i agree with BLAMM... perhaps expanding on this
one will take it somewhere you never expected!

thank you!

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funny, woke up, got online, tapped into the chat and saw this link.

my typical morning flavor for music is Jazz. a little Miles, a little
Mingus... but this is what i was led to.

i cannot critique the song based on structure or instrumentation,
because i don't know enough about jazz to be dangerous. i can only
comment based on subjective emotional response.

my first thought is, it's way too short. boy, this one just got going for
me and it ended. seriously, this could've gone on for another ten
minutes and i'd have been just fine with it!

second, it's a terrific tune to dig into early on a Sunday morning. a bit
sporatic, with some wonderful bits of movement and jingling effects
going on. the overall vibe is both cool and off-center (in being that it's
not exactly positive and upbeat, but not exactly negative and downbeat
either).

this is a perfect tune for making breakfast. the slightly frantic rush of
timing the eggs with the toast... hehe!

but more seriously, you've got a great feel for this style of music. i'm
looking forward to more! but please, in the future, consider doubling
the time of this one. i agree with BLAMM... perhaps expanding on this
one will take it somewhere you never expected!

thank you!

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grrrr.... sorry for the double post!

i guess i liked it THAT much!!! sorry!

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Feedback is a Karmic Thing.

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Good background riffs and runs to set up the mood on this song. Good
choice of drum infelction, sets a spark in the middle of this mood. It's a
good arrangement. Feels surreal when listening. Good job. Have fun
and God Bless.

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Lots of interesting things going on. Lots of interesting syncopation
throughout. You should really take the themes you have started out with
here and run with them.

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Sounds fine nice production and performance.
But I agre too short ma by you must do an REMIX with a longer version.
Thanks for sharing.

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Skean

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You have a very special and unique compositional voice; a real gift. I
always find your music to be very attractive and interesting. However,
as others have said, this piece ends suddenly, as if you just got tired of
it or something, and the idea that comes in around the middle kind of
gets stuck--it repeats many, many times, almost as if you weren't sure
what to do next. I would LOVE to hear you try something longer, and
perhaps consider the idea that repetition in music is a time-honoured
and necessary tradition, but so is variation; the great composers would
often change little things when they repeated material.

By the way, do ever read these comments? There is never any
response, so I'm not sure!

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