This is a good song, has a good rhythm that is catchy. The background
vocals and the lead vocals need to be a little brighter or more enunciated
to clear them up, I hear some blur between them. Also, don't lose your
energy ever!! Keep it up, this is good. God Bless.

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There's a lot of potential in this song. I like those low guitar strikes as a
simple counterpoint. Maybe add a few rising chords to make it build and
lift at the ends of phrases. And the harmonica is soul spice for sure. Get
this all balanced out and you'll have a swell song, Vary the drum kit a bit
more to prevent monotony. Voice is easy going and has a nice intimacy.

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i agree with the comment on the vocals. you should post the lyrics. vocals seem a little loud in the mix. the instrumental seems good. the vocals seem good but hard to understand, the over all singing seems fine, but they almost sound muffled or something. they sound sort of like how mine sound when i record using a computer mic and then singing into a pa system cuz mine makes my voice all weird but it doesnt make it as weird as mine come out. some work on production vocally and this could be a great tune.

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From your description, I'm guessing you boosted the vocals based on previous comments. However, I think they're too up front now...I think if you back it off a bit, you're good to go. Catchy song though!

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I like the slight distortions on the guitar... Gives it a really nice
bouncing twang. Like the way the harmonica comes out of that chorus
too...

I don't particularly agree with the comments on the vocals - though i
agree there's something not quite right about them. I can hear them
fine, and I think the level's ok, but they don't seem to sit in the mix
very well. If it was me, I'd experiment with EQ and reverb settings on
them... But what do I know?

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Has a nice groove. I think maybe bass in distorting a little but other than
that i like it. Nice harmonies, melody.

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