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This is a resubmission of a song. I needed to change the creative commons attribution. Driving techno rock. Uses poem by Drew Roberts called "Uncertainty". see:http://www.archive.org/details/druncertainty

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Lyrics

A crowd
A room
People standing, talking, laughing
Whispers
Glances
Plans unanswered, answered

Song Stats

Hits: 1196
Comments: 10
Fans: 0
Plays: 130
Downloads: 52
Votes: 3
Uploaded: May 09, 2006 - 11:51:44 AM
Last Updated: May 09, 2006 - 11:45:31 AM Last Played: Jun 18, 2009 - 02:14:55 PM

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Creative Commons License:
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Song Actions

Keywords:

techno (392), industrial (128), rock (1437)

Hardware:

guitar, bass.

Software:

Logic Express, iDrum, Amplitube.

Comments

screamalexz	screamalexz said 1296 days ago (May 9th, 2006)
	panning nice panning. like the drum change when the poem is read the second time. seems to be pretty nicely put together. you do a nice job of making sure the song mellows down when the speaking comes in. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

smokey bacon jnr	smokey bacon jnr said 1295 days ago (May 10th, 2006)
	panning appreciate the comment about panning. It took me ages manually drawing in the panning parameters in Logic for the guitar solo so it appeared to be a dialogue. --- Smokey Bacon Jnr - useless like his father Check out my latest song called Hum

	said 1295 days ago (May 9th, 2006)
	Techno Good mix. The music doesn't seem unbalanced like most techno is. Maybe bring out the vocals with a few different ways, reverb, echo, things such. Also, when I listen to this I am expecting singing vocals, since i am so used to it. Maybe throw in some background vocals, soft. Just ideas. Sounds good either way, and I like the back off of the music when you speak. Good job. God Bless.

smokey bacon jnr	smokey bacon jnr said 1295 days ago (May 10th, 2006)
	Techno I like the idea of backing vocals. I may play with vocal synthesizer sounds. thanks! --- Smokey Bacon Jnr - useless like his father Check out my latest song called Hum

smokey bacon jnr	smokey bacon jnr said 1294 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
	Techno oh yes - incidentally, it's not me speaking on this - the vocal is a sample from a poet called Drew Roberts (see link in blurb on song). I can't sing and if I did it would be in a ghastly welsh mixed with liverpudlian accent. --- Smokey Bacon Jnr - useless like his father Check out my latest song called Hum

	said 1294 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
	I Like the Minimalist Lyrics The music seemed not as energetic as it could be and I think part of it is what jsacker called it being 'balanced' - yes the instrumentation is balanced, yet it is somewhat static - not as dynamic as it could be to shake the listener up a bit.

	said 1294 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
	I Like the Minimalist Lyrics The two artists at MacJams who come to my mind when I mention dynamics (soft to loud/slow to fast/etc) are sil-VER and Electro Estate. They are very good with this. --- Ars longa, vita brevis.

smokey bacon jnr

smokey bacon jnr said 1294 days ago (May 11th, 2006)

I Like the Minimalist Lyrics
Hi Mungo, thanks for the comments. I know what you mean about the dynamism, but I quite like the solidity of it as is, although I will have another listen to the artists you mention to steal - ahem - I mean learn - their approaches to creating a shifting musical landscape. I suppose part of my aim is to produce something monolithic like a kind of music mountain! But maybe that's a bit boring for the listener. You've given me food for thought!

---
Smokey Bacon Jnr - useless like his father

Check out my latest song called Hum

Warren Smith

Warren Smith said 1170 days ago (September 11th, 2006)

texture-wrapping
I don't know - a gastly Welsh-Liverpudlian accent might be a nice addition to macjams : >

Of course, it would have to be the right type of music, but I would think industrial techno rock might work for it!

In this particular piece, I think the lyrics are a nice fit with the music.

All of your pieces exhibit catchy melodies. I like the various textures you wrap them in.

Check out my latest song called Pushing and Pulling

smokey bacon jnr	smokey bacon jnr said 1168 days ago (September 13th, 2006)
	Thanks Thanks very much for the comments, but I think I'll keep my tonsils where they belong for now! --- Smokey Bacon Jnr - useless like his father Check out my latest song called Hum

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I work as an information officer for a mental health charity, and I also have a (very) small business producing graphics and web animation (see: www.death2clipart.com).... [see more]

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